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First production please give feedback
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| Scav |
Hello, I just started using reason 3 or 4 days ago.
I THINK I figured out some of the main things about the program...
Anyway Ive just started on a tune and would like feedback on what ive done good and whats bad and need to be changed so far! Some tips & tricks are also welcome :)
Trying to make a proggy/tribal house track i guess :)
EDIT: did the whole track by scratch again lol, added some new stuff and a better bassline!
NEW version http://217.118.60.8/new.mp3 |
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| -blake- |
Overall, for having only used the program for 3 or 4 days you did a good job with this one! The percussion patterns and sounds are good, but they just need to be 'developed' - something that will happen as you write more stuff.
A couple things I'd do, and of course these are just suggestions, but change the kick drum to something a little more poppy or heavy, something with more high end freqs too.
Also, I bet you could get a better sound for the bass notes you have, but if you like em in there I'd turn em down just a bit. Later in the track the bass notes sound at the same time the kick does and it sounds a bit strange. It makes the song kind of flat and thumpy as opposed to rolling and progressive. Try putting them on the off beat.
Anyway, again..nice job all around though! Keep up the good work and keep posting your tracks and updates! |
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| Scav |
thanks for the feedback, you just gave me some new ideas :)
will post update soon |
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| DJPrototypeX |
| purdy good for usin Reason only a couple of days. if u goin for the prog/tribal feel, u need alot more percussion...lol...i mean some drums and such...more than u do now. very well structured song though. just keep goin and use -blake-'s advice, and it'll turn out great... |
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| sot |
| nice and groovy, keep working on the percussion a bit more..also the bassline seemed to come in a lil weird and offbeat, try to work on that a bit. real good job for only a few days with reason. |
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| nic01445 |
| You definitely have some nice sounds in here. for only having reason 3-4 days this is a nice track. I like those tribal beats, but i feel like its missing something. Perhaps through in some 16th note hihats. i really like that bass. Kinda hard to hear though. |
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| Scav |
| ok updated feedback plz :) |
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