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Costa del Sol - Relax (My first production with Fruityloops) 160 Kbps
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| Costa del Sol |
Hi TAs!!
Last week I posted here liquid sunset, but when I had finished it I thought about changing radically of software to obtain better quality productions and I chose Fruityloops to initiate my "new stage" hehe :D
So, dont be so hard please, ITS MY FIRST TRACK WITH FRUITY!! :toocool:
Btw, the style of the track doesn't have similarities with my previous work, more trancier, than this more prog-trancier style, like Filteheadz or Gabriel & Dresden...
So, if you write your 2 cents about it, I would be very thankful!!
Time: 05:36
MP3: 160 Kbps
Tempo: 133,000 BPM
Style: Prog/Trance
Costa del Sol - Relax (Original Mix)
Cheers, Costa. |
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| Lightworks |
wow, you already got a track with one week of fruity? you're fast!
EDIT : well, you've got a good idea there i think for a very moody and deep track. though i'm missing a bassline (i don't think there is one?) and i don't like that kick... you should try a good sample instead of the basic fruity kick i think :)
the lead that starts at about 2:00 mins isn't 100% in key with the other loop i think. maybe a bassline will fix things staying into key.
keep on experimenting i'd say :)
cheers,
LW |
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| Wretched |
Tempo: 133,000 BPM?
I think you mean 133 BPM. 133,000 would be .. a little fast. :p |
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| Costa del Sol |
| quote: | Originally posted by Lightworks
wow, you already got a track with one week of fruity? you're fast!
EDIT : well, you've got a good idea there i think for a very moody and deep track. though i'm missing a bassline (i don't think there is one?) and i don't like that kick... you should try a good sample instead of the basic fruity kick i think :)
the lead that starts at about 2:00 mins isn't 100% in key with the other loop i think. maybe a bassline will fix things staying into key.
keep on experimenting i'd say :)
cheers,
LW |
Hi Lightworks!!
Thanx for this nice feedback! well, you have the true, I was having problems doing a good bassline for the track because I dont have a full-dominate of fruity yet.. :) DO U GUYS KNOW WHICH PLUG-IN GENERATOR IS BETTER TO MAKE GOOD BASSLINES?? about the kick... mmm I dont see any probelms here but hey, I respect all the opinions!!
Cheers, Costa. |
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| deejay_naku |
| quote: | Originally posted by Wretched
Tempo: 133,000 BPM?
I think you mean 133 BPM. 133,000 would be .. a little fast. :p |
Tryin' to be smart here, huh?
In many countries comma is used to separate decimals, like here in this case.
133,000000000000000000000000000 BPM is just a more accurate way of saying 133 BPM |
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| Costa del Sol |
| quote: | Originally posted by Wretched
Tempo: 133,000 BPM?
I think you mean 133 BPM. 133,000 would be .. a little fast. :p |
hahahahaha:haha: yeah! 133,000 is a little fast for you, but for me this means only 133 BPM
Like deejay_naku said in many countries the comma is used to separate decimals!! Ok, thats not important tho!! I need comments about the track :D:p |
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| Bren-F |
For a first track with F'loops this is pretty damn good.
The the perc is very nice, sorta reminds me of the Gabriel & Dresen Remix of Andain - Summer Calling :)
However, it badly needs a bass line, preferably a really deep acoustic sound bass or sub bass.
Also I dont like the melody...sorry. Strings playing the chords with some sort ofplucked stlye synth playing a deep melody would suit the track more then the one U have used.
Keep at it tho, I expect a total stormer next time :D :D |
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| acell |
Hey man,
First track with friuty.. well done.. i opend fruity once and was like.. wtf.. i'll stick with reason ;)
not to bad. I agree with Bren-F though.. needs a bassline.. maybe something like this..
k---k---k---k
--bb--b---bb--b--
i really short stab bass.. not 2 sure but definatly needs something.
i like the main melody but some not pregerssions just didn't ring right in my ear.. also.. with the instrument.. try adding a couple of voices (if you can.. don't know friuty) and play with some reverb.. reverb can really brighten up a sound.. especialy on cords/pads
one thing in it i do like though is how your structured the hats.. very melow.. i likes...
not my style.. but.. for first time in frity i give 10/10.. in the scense of a track.. 7/10.. keep @ it though..!! :) |
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| Costa del Sol |
| quote: | Originally posted by Bren-F
For a first track with F'loops this is pretty damn good.
The the perc is very nice, sorta reminds me of the Gabriel & Dresen Remix of Andain - Summer Calling :)
However, it badly needs a bass line, preferably a really deep acoustic sound bass or sub bass.
Also I dont like the melody...sorry. Strings playing the chords with some sort ofplucked stlye synth playing a deep melody would suit the track more then the one U have used.
Keep at it tho, I expect a total stormer next time :D :D |
Hey Bren, wazzup!
Yeah, Im totally agrre with you, this needs a better bassline, but I dont know which plugin generator is better to make great BL?
Glad u expect for me a total stormer next time.. hahah :D
C yaa , Costa. |
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| somnium |
| wow, this is quite impressive for a first track. these sounds are all pretty standard, you need to work on sampling/synthesizing, but your sense of rhythm and timing is quite amazing for a first-timer. don't stop producing anytime soon, that's for sure :) |
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| Costa del Sol |
hey mate! wow, niiice comments here! Thanx!
Also, somnium, its not my first-track ever, just my first track with fruity! Before I was working with Music 2000 :p:p ;) |
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