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somnium - vague prophet
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| somnium |
hey. i am new here...i have been into production for about a year now. i don't normally make trance, but i recently made a trance track, and was looking for places to post it. i just found out about this place last night :D
http://www.angelfire.com/nm/guitfun...gue_Prophet.mp3
i know it has some problems regarding mastering, but those can hopefully be fixed. please give me some feedback :) |
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| somnium |
| oh, and i have a question. can i post tracks of genres other than trance? i mean i know it's "tranceaddict.com forums" but this is a huge collection of producers. i'd love to see some of the feedback i get on some of my other tracks in the near future. |
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| serp |
nice track, sounds great!. it's interesting as its quite different. i would probably class this track as progressive trance rather than just trance :).
just an idea, after the breakdown (something similar to at 4:23, try using a simple PvD'ish off beat bassline that might sound great, it would really energise the main parts give it a try! also off beat ride cymbals are great for adding extra energy
keep up the good work!
dave |
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| somnium |
| cool, thanks...most people dont respond to my work much. i will, perhaps, make some modifications to it soon (cause i'd like to send it into labels) and i'll keep that in mind. |
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| ABSYNTH |
Vrey nice track mate, production is A1;) It has got a prog feel 2 it, i agree that the off beat bass would give it more go, but i think it would change the feel of the track 2 much.
Good work:tongue3 |
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| somnium |
wow, thanks :D
i'd like to send it into labels...think i have a chance =D? |
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| serp |
| quote: | Originally posted by somnium
wow, thanks :D
i'd like to send it into labels...think i have a chance =D? |
you should have a good chance!, one more thing, i think you should also try and thicken the track out more, either with some background synths or pads etc, just to give it a fuller more polished sound:) |
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| somnium |
| hmmm. i'm pretty content with the track except for a few things...mainly the hihats, and yeah, i want to put some pads in, especially during the part when the 4/4 first comes in, after the intro. later in the track it's too full to put pads like that in. hmmm....i'm tryin to work on too many songs at once. this could take a while :tongue2 |
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