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[trance] John Steenbergen - I Miss You
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| John |
It's been a while since I finished something, but here it is:p And no vocals this time:rolleyes::D
Please listen and tell me what you think of it and what you think needs to be improved. Thanks!:)
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duration: 8.44
size: 12mb
bitrate: 192kbs
Feedback much appreciated;)
John |
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| MeiX |
Nice and clean.
Introductive part is maybe too long. Sawtooth sounds kinda primitive.
Main riff is ok. Maybe you should try to move supersaw sound octave up.
Overall: 7/10 |
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| Mr.Mystery |
The main bit is great, but it sounds a bit dry. Maybe a bit more reverb or more stuff going on the background would help. The closed hihats are also a tad too loud compared to the rest of the mix.
Lovely tune otherwise :) |
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| John |
thnx for replying guys:)
ill see what i can do..if only i had a faster pc:@:p
john |
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| Trancevision |
Hi John !
like your track, melody is great.
Awesome composing of the track and I believe if you just work on the bassline ( too weak )...;)
Trancevision |
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| Lightworks |
Hi John ;)
Lovely little track you got there. Nothing really special, but it works... I'm not too fond of the dry sound and some of the drums (claps & kick), but the rest sounds a ok.
Cheers ;)
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| John |
thanks for listening tv and lw!
ill see if i can make the bassline a bit stronger, although it sounds alright on my radio and headphones:)
im not too font of my clap myself.. and i guess i need to add some reverb to make it more 'wet'
thnx for feedback guys!
anyone else?:D
john |
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| nic01445 |
i have to agree: the bass could use some work. and the percussion is kinda dry. i like the patterns and everything, just needs a little reverb. maybe some eqing. i really like the breakdown. i would mess with the attack on the strings, so that they arent so stabbing, you know? give it more of a mellow touch. lead sample is kinda simple. great chord progressions! keep it up john!
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