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white sun - obsession
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| dbl |
some more hard trance :)
made with some loucy headphone's soo like last time there can be some problems with the bass on speakers, but i hope not :)
white sun - obsession
please download and leave a comment :) |
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| Eugene |
NICE!
However, right now a bit repetitive in the middle. This main theme could be a prelude to some more complex melody, IMO.
The title is perfect... I agree with your choice.
I'd like to see this developed into a full anthem! ;) |
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| dbl |
| quote: | Originally posted by Eugene
NICE!
However, right now a bit repetitive in the middle. This main theme could be a prelude to some more complex melody, IMO.
The title is perfect... I agree with your choice.
I'd like to see this developed into a full anthem! ;) |
thank's man :)
using the melodie as a prelude.. hmm.. maybe..
will take and work some more on it..
anyone else??? |
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| tranzMental |
Hmm...this song is DEFINETLY interesting. I love the title - I get some weird vision when I hear 'White Sun - Obssesion'. Very catchy in some strange way. I love your sound fx man! Definetly something out of the ordinary.
By, the way, I was hoping that the melody would be a bit more complex man - take a different turn around the middle. Say after 3:11 - it was a good idea to add those high synths, but, at the same time, keep working on this track - it feels like more can be added!
Oh - if you add more power, this track would sound SICK at a huge event - say like a big DJ like Edgar V playing this track! I can imagine it - I'd go wild man! Keep this up! Later. -Mental |
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| dbl |
| quote: | Originally posted by tranzMental
Hmm...this song is DEFINETLY interesting. I love the title - I get some weird vision when I hear 'White Sun - Obssesion'. Very catchy in some strange way. I love your sound fx man! Definetly something out of the ordinary.
By, the way, I was hoping that the melody would be a bit more complex man - take a different turn around the middle. Say after 3:11 - it was a good idea to add those high synths, but, at the same time, keep working on this track - it feels like more can be added!
Oh - if you add more power, this track would sound SICK at a huge event - say like a big DJ like Edgar V playing this track! I can imagine it - I'd go wild man! Keep this up! Later. -Mental |
thank's man :)
will keep working some on it :) |
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| MaRt |
| Liking it - I agree with the others' suggestions though. ;) Keep it up! |
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| burns |
Nice, Maybee some more sounds, Fx and percussion to improve on this :)
Theres a little hi hat that sounds weird on my monitors, like not in time but nother major,
Keep it up, maybee change a few keys in the melody as it goes on :) |
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| dbl |
thank's for the comments.. appreciate it :)
will try to work some more on it.. maybe add some percussion and fx... and try something with the melodie... tryied yesterday, but it all went to hell.. kinda :/ |
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| dj_revive_ |
I agree about the melody. It could change a bit after the initial build up. Allthough I love the sound. What equip do you use???
/Revive |
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| dbl |
| quote: | Originally posted by dj_revive_
I agree about the melody. It could change a bit after the initial build up. Allthough I love the sound. What equip do you use???
/Revive |
thank's :)
i use fruityloops with some VSTi's :) |
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| tranzMental |
There's a definetly a lot of emotion in this track DBL - And it's kinda apacalyptic in some ways, lol! Well, I'm a sucker for Hard Electronic sounds, and I was listening to your song on my headphones, and there was some good elements in the track. The bass is DEFINETLY, DEFINETLY pumpin, and the melody brings you into the track -
I'll admit - the melody is very addictive - when I'm not hearing it, I hear it in my head, lol! Very good style man. Don't get pressured into fixing it - do it when you feel necessary, and when you get the inspiration. Later. -Mental |
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| dbl |
| quote: | Originally posted by tranzMental
There's a definetly a lot of emotion in this track DBL - And it's kinda apacalyptic in some ways, lol! Well, I'm a sucker for Hard Electronic sounds, and I was listening to your song on my headphones, and there was some good elements in the track. The bass is DEFINETLY, DEFINETLY pumpin, and the melody brings you into the track -
I'll admit - the melody is very addictive - when I'm not hearing it, I hear it in my head, lol! Very good style man. Don't get pressured into fixing it - do it when you feel necessary, and when you get the inspiration. Later. -Mental |
thank's alot man :)
glad you like it
nhaa.. i wount.. will take my time with it.. have no real inspiration for it right now, so i have to :)
thank's again :) |
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