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| Dioxys |
well, here it is, the final version of my first tune! :)
called starfall, got some nice reactions from people over at the swedish forums! wanna know what the rest of you thinks?
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| Dioxys |
hehehe, as allways, comments on TA allways gets missinderstood when smileys loead so ing slow :D
thx man! :D |
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| S2K |
| Very nice work - I especially like the piano, strings and the overall synth quality in this track. It's excellent! Listening on this system, I'd say it's only flaw was it's bass, which I think may contribute to the lack of "drive" that I felt in some places. Seems a bit muffled in a sense, lacks a certain edge to it that would make this track flow a bit more - making it really awesome. |
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| djtezz |
Very clean, nice bass and use of synths. piano soundin good along with the strings. nice work.
tezz |
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| Dioxys |
S2k:
yeah, could be because it was my first try ever to master my track
i'll see if i can do something about it!
some more comments would be appreciated! :) |
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| [nils] |
:eyes: :eyes: :eyes:
wow! excellent! its crazy!!
:crazy: :crazy: :crazy:
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| tu_face |
this sounds very nice :)
if this is ur first track then well done, verrry good job hehe. i agree with s2k, the bass needs something doing to it, its fine up until the breakdown but after then it needs to stay up.. maybe put another bass synth behind it so u still retain the filter effect on the bassline but giving it a little extra meat :)
the breakdown is very nice and floaty, the lead synth sounds pretty good, but i think it could also do with another synth behind it to give it some umph. also by 16 bars after the breakdown i think the melody needs to develop and expand, i.e. make it do something different.
nice ending :D
all in all very nice track ;) good work |
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