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OrgaNik - Together we Shine (halo remix)
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| JMF [TrAcId] |
*WORK IN PROGRESS*
I'm moving house in 2 days, and i'm not going to be online for a short while until i get my cable fitted. so i want you people to check out my work in progress, very much a rough cut, and i can see/hear some things which need to be fixed myself, but if you guys can take a listen and give me some comments and idea's - i'm going to have plenty of time to work on this thing until i have my net connection up & running again.
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/stephe...o-remix)WIP.mp3
(BTW - the bass sounding a little out of tune in the second half is one of the things i know to fix :haha: ) |
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| JMF [TrAcId] |
all those views and no replies - thanks a lot people!!
i'm off line for a couple of weeks from tomorrow, and no-one can give me any advice/criticism/feedback at all ??? |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| Is this the same cut you sent me the other day? |
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| MaRt |
| Not bad - I can't say I have any decent suggestions, but good luck with the move and all that! ;) |
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| JMF [TrAcId] |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Is this the same cut you sent me the other day? |
It's different,
longer, more synths, and new percs. still pretty rough though |
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| ABSYNTH |
[QUOTE]Originally posted by JMF [TrAcId]
all those views and no replies - thanks a lot people!!
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Boy do i know what that is like:mad:
Anyway, the track has got loads of good elements and is looking good, as you said this is a 'work in progress' so the only thing i can see that it needs is beefing up alot in the sound dept, but i think you will do this anyway when it is finished!
Nice work;)
(p.s. Good luck with the move ;) ) |
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| JMF [TrAcId] |
cheers for the comments Absynth :) yeah, you are right, this forum is a tough crowd indeed, but i'll keep working them, hopefuly by the time i get back online this will be finished and highly polished :)
just hope i can get the sounds i want without any help from my usual mentors :) |
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| DJPrototypeX |
| really cool rmx...but that snare/clap is a bit too generic...it doesnt seem to build up to anythin...but bein its just a clip, understandable...this has the possibilty to be great...gotta work on it though...the way u used the piano is great though...thas really cool and builds up the emotion... |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| I think there might be a slight clash between the bass and the kick... can't be sure, though. |
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