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white sun - ancient shadow
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| dbl |
a new track from me...
made it last night, made some small changes today and now it's kinda finished... depends on your comments :p
download HERE |
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| Eugene |
Hello, Mr. White Sun :):)
The intro is elaborate, interesting job with that; also, cool fx.
But I don't like the melody!!! :confused: :confused:
sorry :(
start with something else, don't develop this. |
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| tranzMental |
*Cracks Knuckles*
I'm gonna do a review of 'WhiteSun - Ancient Shadows'. Not listening to the last post at all. So there we be no biasness, whatsoever.
Okay, the sounds in the intro are incredible - you got a good synth program running.
Now when the melody starts kicking off at 1 minute, I see this song is PURELY about energy! PURE ENERGY! Now I am feeling this energy this power.
Now, I think you should continue with this project - the energy to this track is pretty magnificent. I definetly feel it - your kicks/claps have this energy to them, that keep the track pumping.
Now the melody - the melody isn't about a song that's super 'melodic' - no. I see you didnt' want to make a floaty track - you wanted to make something hard - something that would bang - JUST BANG! JUST FREAKING BANG! THAT'S IT!
Now, I thought this song was losing it's energy but at 3:19, all those SUPER HIGH synths going off TOTALLY SET IT OFF! YOU READ MY MIND! I was gonna say, add some more synths! I SWEAR! I WAS GONNA TYPE ADD SOME HIGHER SYNTHS FOR ENERGY! But I deleted that, and wrote this instead.
DBL, AKA 'White Sun' - I am feeling your message - you wanna bang the living hell outta people's speakers - enuff of that float, uplifting crap, and just BLAST THE HELL OUTTA PEOPLE'S SPEAKERS! YES! That's your message - I can read that in your last 2 trax. Peace be with you -
For this trax theme - Energy - and for this 'style' of hard trance - I give this track an 8.5 in total - but for your hard work, diligence, and patience to get all the sounds right - (including the tough synth work) I'll give it a 9.0 for effort! GREAT WORK - cuz it's hard to make a song energetic - instead many people fall short trying to do so, and their music turns out FLAT! GO DBL!
As for Eugene - your opinions are worthy too! Won't knock em, considering you have a different sytle of music - but like you, I too listen to my old Tunnel Trance CD's sometimes - I'll dig out CD 6, 7, 11, (which I burned back in the Napster Days) and play em - I love the 'dark' side CD's from CD 8 I beleive. SO PHAT! NE Wayz, LATER! -Mental |
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| dbl |
thank's alot tranzmental :)
glad you like it... and what you wrote is exactly what i wanted :)
thank's to you too eugene :) |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Mmm... tasty... me likes. Very solid work overall.
The high synths were a bit too high for me at times, though.
Edit:
Actually, I'd love to try and remix this... |
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| dbl |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Mmm... tasty... me likes. Very solid work overall.
The high synths were a bit too high for me at times, though.
Edit:
Actually, I'd love to try and remix this... |
glad you like it :)
will fix something up for you |
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| tor8024 |
great track, lots of cool sounds and fx!
sounds like the kick and bassline are too compressed though.. but maybe that was necessary to avoid clipping..
solid track overall! |
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| Massive84 |
Hey, pretty nice man, i love the FX, and the melody is great i say !
what proggie you used and plugins if you used any.. |
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| djtezz |
Hey,
great stuff here mate, very powerful, uplifting synth crazy stuff :D i like it!
maybes one day i could do a remix perhaps...
keep up the good work mate!
tezz :) |
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| Project T |
| this is rather nice :) if i had cd dex this would be goin str8 in my taw shows, with a bit of mastering and tweaking this could be rather mint :) |
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| dbl |
djtezz: sure... just send me a PM when you want to do it and i'll send you the stuff you need :)
project t: thank's man :) yeah.. i haven't mastered it yet... gotta do it some day now... maybe tomorrow when i wake up if i have time :)
massive84: thank's :) i'm using fruitystudio.. hmm.. the pluggins.. think i only used FM7 and VAZ2010 for it
and thank's tor :) |
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| Lightworks |
It sounds interesting mate, I like the hard trance feel, with the deep elements. Though a good mastering is needed... It sounds like everything is overcompressed right now; the leads are on top of everything as well.
Other than that, this is nice work, keep it up!
Greetz,
LW |
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