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Square Bear feat. Cami - Alone in the Crowd (OrgaNik Remix) (pg. 2)
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| JohnOC |
| good stuf nik, im likin the use of vocals-not too much just the right quantity, great depth to it. some of the percs are a bit sharp, apart from that-excellent |
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| MK-S |
Let me be the first to say, omghi2u Cami. ;)
I have to be honest here. The vocals don't fit. Probably due to the difficulties of doing this over the net.
Anyway, the production is nice. I like the lead alot. |
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| Massive84 |
Hiya mate
Well
Remove the vocals please, dont even add new one, i would like this track without any vocals :) |
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| Massive84 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Cami
Hi!!! I like the track w/out vocals too, but since I am a singer I like it with vocals as well! :D Although, it would be nice to have Britney Spears' budget to record songs!
http://www.soundclick.com/cami
http://www.camio.net |
yea well you know, i checked out the orignal, and i didn't like the vocals there either, it sounded or to slow or to fast for the track, and the vocals came each time kinda unexpected, hard to discribe from mine view, but hey it is not your voice or skills, i checked the song(sorry forgot name) but in the discritption, it said it was your first one that you wrote, and there i could hear, that you had a nice voice :) |
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| JohnOC |
| quote: | | Let me be the first to say, omghi2u Cami. |
let me be the 2nd :stongue: |
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| arctic |
| You do all realize that this is an old thread that the n00b bumped :p |
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| Cami |
Well I am pretty clueless with recording/producing, I just sing and try to write! :) Thanks for checking out my other songs, hopefully there will be more in the future. :)
| quote: | Originally posted by Massive84
yea well you know, i checked out the orignal, and i didn't like the vocals there either, it sounded or to slow or to fast for the track, and the vocals came each time kinda unexpected, hard to discribe from mine view, but hey it is not your voice or skills, i checked the song(sorry forgot name) but in the discritption, it said it was your first one that you wrote, and there i could hear, that you had a nice voice :) |
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| Boy trance |
Ok, um... the track is ok. I think you did a decent job at the remix, good sounds good layout... but the vocals need to have SOMETHING done to them... I would never leave all those vocals in the way they are, too much reverb on them, they sound too distant... these vocals need more effects on em, cut em up, reverse em or sumthin like 'Nothing (returning 93mix)' you know? I'd butcher em! lol
Anyhow, keep it up bro! |
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| Cami |
I think tweaked-out vocals are really cool, wish I could do it. i like how BT quirks up all his singers' vocals, and many other trance songs do the same. I don't know how to do it or I would too. Lasgo does not really do effects on their vocals though, do they?
Oh and HI everyone!
| quote: | Originally posted by Boy trance
Ok, um... the track is ok. I think you did a decent job at the remix, good sounds good layout... but the vocals need to have SOMETHING done to them... I would never leave all those vocals in the way they are, too much reverb on them, they sound too distant... these vocals need more effects on em, cut em up, reverse em or sumthin like 'Nothing (returning 93mix)' you know? I'd butcher em! lol
Anyhow, keep it up bro! |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by Boy trance
Ok, um... the track is ok. I think you did a decent job at the remix, good sounds good layout... but the vocals need to have SOMETHING done to them... I would never leave all those vocals in the way they are, too much reverb on them, they sound too distant... these vocals need more effects on em, cut em up, reverse em or sumthin like 'Nothing (returning 93mix)' you know? I'd butcher em! lol
Anyhow, keep it up bro! |
Yeah, I know. It was my first time doing something with vocals so I can't _quite_ do anything "Nothing"-like yet ;) |
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| tranzMental |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Yeah, I know. It was my first time doing something with vocals so I can't _quite_ do anything "Nothing"-like yet ;) |
Like everything, it'll come with time. :happy2: I know in time, that if you really wanted this massive sound, you would be persistent in trying to acheive that. Well, in time, if you keep working with vocals, it'll get easier, and easier, and you'll get more of a pro sound.
Let me just say this - this song is very radio friendly, and the notes are pretty great, and powerful. Excellent for female vocals.
But, of course, this is your first time messing with vocals, very understandable, so I wont put any negative criticism.
One question - did Cami give you the vocal with 'Reverb' in it, or did you add the 'verb' effects? Something about the 'verb' reminds me of that Karoake feel.
Cami's voice is pretty good. Great for that electronic feel. , lol. :p I have never worked with vocals before, and it seems like a respectable challenge. Well, the actual song 'if' dubbed sounds great, and can be definetly be commercially successful.
Cami - keep up the good work with your voice. Mystery - Keep up the overall great production skills. I'm out. -Mental |
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