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| mezzir |
Don't really know if anything like this has been done before, but since we're all into music I figure there has to be a few poets round here. So post some stuff, just to get it out there or request critique, up to you.
I'll get it kickin with a piece I wrote the other night called 'Falling'
Falling, by Chris Brainerd
I feel like I need someone to love tonite
Someone to push me back when I
Get to near the edge
I’m always on the edge
Drivin through the streets like we don’t care
We fool around but I’m not there
You pull me back
From another late night attack
Everyone loves me, but then no one knows me when I’m down
Everyone needs me and everyone ignores you when you’re not really all that happy to be another fake ass prep like on the TV
I can’t stop driving even though I’m running low on gas
Or maybe it just feels like I’m slowin down
Sitting in a lawn chair in a parking lot, where’s my life gone now
Where’s my life leading me
Cause I don’t really ever think about the future, except when I’m with you
And even when I’m near you then I only think about whats going wrong
Cause its only one more time that I can stand it till I go over the edge
Its only one more time I can keep my balance, I’m looking over now
They say that love is like falling, well how bout falling down?
Cause every time I show affection, I get pushed to the ground
And the ground is cold and my hands are sore, but I’m not getting up
Cause one more step up is one more foot to fall again
It feels like there’s no way to get around it but its getting closer now
Falling down’s not all that bad, it’s the impact that you dread
And even if you don’t hit rock bottom, you’d rather that instead
Of falling all the rest of your life, falling till no end
Im falling down till I’m outta site, and absent from your head
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| moncster |
Roses are red
violets are blue
I hate poems that don't rhyme |
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| Orbax |
| i have a couple of good ones...oh wait no i dont, i lost them when my FU$@ING HARD DRIVE CRAShED! ARGHHHHHHH |
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| Vivid Boy |
You have nice feet
from ur ankles to ur instep i really love ur feet,
so slim so strong, so shapely, so greacefully, and petite!
so wrap ur toes around my jonsin ,its time to beat my meat!
or
i like the way u lick my nuts
my nuts in ur mouth feel so good
warm saliva drippin off |
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| gwrmarines |
Refering to a girl:
Roses are red
Pickles are green
Spread your legs and i'll make you scream:haha: :toothless |
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| Clyde77 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Orbax
i have a couple of good ones...oh wait no i dont, i lost them when my FU$@ING HARD DRIVE CRAShED! ARGHHHHHHH |
i feeel the pain.! all the pictures of my bitches too:whip: |
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| bia |
i have a lot of poems...but here is one...if you like it, i'll post more.....
photographs as memoirs, tainted, yet we still fade,
could you come back?
footsteps in my brain, drowned yellow and orange sketches of spain,
would you come back?
misapprehensions anm misconceptions stained on my skin,
emotions inside of me only tolerated to scream loudly within.
poisened by fate,
silenced by hate,
moments too late,
i'd tell you to wait.
would you love me as fondly in return,
could you but learn?
patiently, i will have my way. |
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