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Paul Van Dyk - Connected (Matthew Adams Remix) [SAMPLE!]
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| dEEkAy |
Hi fellas...
I started this like 1 week ago but started it from scratch after I noticed it sucks :)
http://oehoe18.mine.nu/~deekay/connectedv4m.mp3
I'm that far already, this sample is a bit out to date though cause there are some things that need to be fixed like: the buildup comes a bit all of sudden, the bass after the buildup seems to be a very bit offkey afterwards. Some additional bass and strings might follow...we'll see |
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| RobEnergy |
nice work
sounds good
but the ending hmm? |
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| DJPrototypeX |
| you've gotta finish this dude...really cool remix...love that break... |
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| rb2k1 |
| sounds very cool dude .. nice work make this a higher priority to finish. :D |
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| Cobalt |
I have just two suggestions (based on your most recent version):
1) Something slightly different has to be done with that nifty two-phase buildup thing around 2:00. I like the concept, but something about it, particularly the first "peak" strikes me as amateur-sounding.
2) In the track over all, but especially right after that breakdown you need wider, cleaner, heavier bass. The melodic work sounds fine, but would be greatly enhanced in my opinion by a stronger (or maybe different?) bassline, with a deeper sound than what you have right now. The current bass also seems off-key somehow. I would avoid fooling with those bass key shifts too much, as my ear finds them mostly annoying, but that's just me.
But the breaks part is very nice.
Good work. :) |
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| TranceLuver4evr |
Nice.......I love the breaks part also
sounds great so far expect the ending is a bit wierd
You have to finish this soon.........looking forward to it :D |
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