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Need criticism of new epic track
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| Haimoimoi |
http://www.zoneseek.net/Haimoimoi-ShatteredOpus.mp3
I realize that this sounds dissimilar to "real" trance, so feel free to let me know what I did wrong!
Also, apologies if my webhost is running slow. I need to have words with them. Angry words. |
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| Haimoimoi |
| Heh, that bad, eh? |
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| sooper |
Well this is different!
I like your bass progression...its a 'feel good' one!
But there's times when it sounds like your piano rolls are out of key with the rest of the song... around the 1:14 mark and on...
This song has potential - keep it up! |
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| Haimoimoi |
Thanks! I'm trying to break away from tried-and-true sounds. I need to clean up the strings a lot, there's some dissonance that I like by itself, but doesn't fit with the track.
I'm also trying to rethink the bass at the beginning so it has a little more energy. |
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| AZCA |
this track just doesn't sound right in my OP.
it's too babyish, meaning, sounds like a new year's tune for babies ;)
and I don't see any build up in it, just straight flat.
don't beat me :p |
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| Haimoimoi |
SLAP! THUMP!! CRRRUUUNNCHHHH!
Seriously though, the middle section needs to be turned into a real buildup.
I don't really get the baby part though, hehe. |
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