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white sun - ketoprofen
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| dbl |
brand new track :)
white sun - ketoprofen
there is one thing in the track that i think might need something more.. but i leave that for you to deside... caus i have no idea what to add... hehehehe :p
now please do some commenting :) |
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| Project T |
this is fairly quality i must say :D
things i would change...
the build comes in far too soon imo and is a bit sombre for the melody, the strings in the break sound a bit flanged/phased incorrectly to me.
however the bass and percs are mint, the melody is quality, the effects are cool, maybe quieten the crash and the leads, this could be mint with some more work, and make the ****** longer :D |
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| sooper |
This is a nice tune! Very melodic & uplifting with a nice driving pumping beat!
I think its missing big FAT hi hats though... ya I miss them a lot while listening to the tune.
great work - keep it up! |
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| MaRt |
| This is quality - I can't fault the track itself but there does seem to be an excess of bass and a distinct lack of treble that makes for quite a 'muffled' sound. |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| Also, everything seems to be recorded at a slightly too loud volume... |
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| dbl |
| quote: | Originally posted by MaRt
This is quality - I can't fault the track itself but there does seem to be an excess of bass and a distinct lack of treble that makes for quite a 'muffled' sound. |
think i made the misstake to turn up the bass some before i rendered it... so i will turn it down a little bit...
you might be right too mystery... will turn it down.. sometime :) hehe
and thank's for the comments :) |
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| JohnOC |
| gonna download the revised version :tongue3 |
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| dbl |
| quote: | Originally posted by JohnOC
gonna download the revised version :tongue3 |
hehehe.... ok... i'm working on it :) |
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