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Uplifting Trance
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| hey cheggy |
This is my first attempt at trance. All my stuff has been techno previously. I would love some feedback as to how it sounds and any suggestions.
cheers.
Download right click, save target as. |
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| hey cheggy |
| Come on guys. Last week I post a track and not one reply. This week I do the same with again, no reply. Kinda lowers the morale a bit. |
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| Massive84 |
Ok i here some tips:
Please try to put the Link that downloads your track, and not clicking to some sites to get the download, link safes time, with the people who have a slower connection..
Ok the melody is ok, the kicks lacks, sound, its to muddy, the begin synth is ugly, i think you put to much flang on it, or something els, the synth that you took for the melody, i say it fits, but then again, you gave it something that sounds, distorted, or flanged, i find that a bit ruining the synth
o and more precussion will give the track more drive :) |
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| Lightworks |
The tune lacks a bit mate, especially in the eq department I think. Levels are way too off for me, percussion should be louder, some synths more silent. Just eq and clear them out, it'll sound much better then imo.
Melody is ok, but not really doing it for me... Well, keep trying I'd say ;) |
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| Sebraaa12 |
cant hear the bassline but I really like the melody !! try make the main riffs little bit smoother and add some EQ :)
but we need full song :) |
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| barryfigiel |
Not bad for one of your first attempts mate. The low quality mp3 doesn't really do it any favours either IMO. Keep at it though - i reckon the potential could be there!
barryfigiel |
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| hey cheggy |
Thanks guys. That helps a lot.
I'm taking of some of the amp release and reverb off the main lead. It seems to make everything a lot clearer. Maybe take some resonance off that pad, was just looking for something different at the time. Basslines I've never been good at, but I'll try for something a little more noticeable. Percussion, yeah, it needs to be a less standard, but it was just a beginning. Thanks for the suggestions, and keep em coming. |
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