| kewlness |
Remix your remix eh??? hehe
anyways... to sum up your track in one short statement... there was nothing bad or good about your track that stood out...
Basically, it seems to follow the standard "formula" for a typical trance track and there is nothing wrong with that but it doesn't mean that it's great too...
I've heard a lot of tracks on this forum, and the ones that I personally really like are the ones that particularly stand out not in technical quality but also in creativity and originality.
For example, imagine this track being thrown in a mix with 15 other tracks. Now, after hearing the mix, would you feel that your track "stood out" or did it just feel like just another track that is kinda thrown in there that doesn't really make you feel anything...
I look for creativity in tracks a lot, and in my honest opinion, I don't feel that there is too much in here... If you aren't thinking of making a track that is melodic, then you got it make it pumping that just kinda drives you... in this case, i didn't feel either...
Ok, with all that said... Technically, your track is quite decent... There is nothing wrong with it... Nothing is too loud or drowned out and this results in your track sounding clean...
But I think what most producers struggle with is not making a track that "sounds" good... but a track that makes you "feel" good... You can have all the "know-how" in producing, but without good creativity and diversity in your tracks, it will just be "just another track"...
My advice to you is to get some musical background... learn some piano and some guitar... I feel that the thing that stops most amateur producers from improving is the lack of musical knowledge... you need to KNOW music in order to MAKE music and to be creativity...
Sorry for such a long reply but that's what I usually do ;)... don't get me wrong, your track isn't bad or anything... it just doesn't have that extra "spice" that kicks it off
cheers and good luck in the future :) |
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