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broken mirror - between time (original mix), my new tune!
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| hadi burpee |
here is a new song i did
feedback would be awesome
if you heard my last song, let me know if you think i have improved
last one was breaks, but this is trance
its in there
http://67.82.25.80:2003/hadi/
5:34 at 128kbit
thanks
-hadi |
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| Snarf |
I like this... Its a v.nice tune! V.atmospheric/eery! :D
I like the way it starts aswell!
Nice one m8! :) |
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| rb2k1 |
hey buddy, i really think your improving greatly.. this tune is totally one of your best works so far.. keep this up at this rate buddy! :) As far as the tune goes.. i dig it.. very deep and full sounding :D Very Chill in a sort.. but deep. i like.
Your Friend,
~rb |
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| Rakoon |
| Sweet track. A lot of improvement since the breaks track. Keep it up. |
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| hapamoto |
| good hadi.. i just told u on aim wat i would do to improve.. just work on getting the whole thing in key and its all good mang.. |
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| Massive84 |
hmm
i did not like the phased hat or what ever it is..further the sudden change over of the track, from ghost sound, to chillout sound, didnt soud nice to me..but hey thats a matter of taste i think.. |
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| hadi burpee |
| quote: | Originally posted by Massive84
hmm
i did not like the phased hat or what ever it is..further the sudden change over of the track, from ghost sound, to chillout sound, didnt soud nice to me..but hey thats a matter of taste i think.. |
thnx for all the feedback everyone
personally i like the phased hat. that sudden change, i need to work on actually. i was listening to it today in the car. perhaps when i get home i will work on it. thnx for pointing that out =) |
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| starglider |
| I like the atmosphere again, it still sounds a bit... empty in places. I guess though that the more layers you add the more complex it gets and the harder it is to get everything to fit. But that kinda thing will come with practice, I figure, and I definitely like your style, so keep at it. |
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| hadi burpee |
| hey everyone. thank you so much for the comments =). last night i was working on fixing the track up a bit. changed the starting pads and rearranged the higher pitched ones. addeda breaks section on the breakdown. i think its much better than this version i showed you. i am at work, but i will post it up when i get time =), thanks |
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| tranzMental |
Ahhh...the opening pads...such great atmosphere! Like adding 'setting' to the track. A bit spooky at first, but overall, sounds very cool.
Some of the sounds are great, and some can use some work, but overall, you have a unique innocent sound. I think it's that Progressive Trance influence man.
The phased hat is okay - not too found of it after a while, but if you like it, that's cool. ;) I wouldn't like to tell people how to produce all the time, but I'll just let you know what I think about that.
Keep up the production! This is definetly better than your last one! Heading to great places! Thumbs up for sure! -Mental |
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