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HELP NEEDED (Remix "Naked Angel")
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Lennyboy
I tried to do something with the Naked angel (Scott Bond ft. Solarstone) remix contest and came up with the following.

http://www.xs4all.nl/~metsel/nakedangel20.mp3

But this is my first time at making music so I would like to get some feedback on this remix because I don't know where I'd made mistakes.
leedearn
woooo i like this muchos! clap could be changed or add some fx, i like the percussion and the synths are very nice, i like the seamless blending, vocal ahhhh's need some fx as they sound flat, just seems to be lacking in something, its a very very good start but u need to add more elements to it imo, beef it up aswell. this could be a very good progressive remix, also i dont like how the main lead disappears so quickly. dude, it can be huuuuuuuuge!
Dj-Gingi
holy !

hehe
this is REALLY good
soemthing different
kind of breakbeat / tribal a little

this is a PERFECT song for a club, to be dancing to in slow motion with a girl and myst comes falling down, if u know what i mean ;)

VERY nice and for a first track? i would think that u made like 50 to make a track like this!

this is REALLY good, dark and good

what did u make it with?
Lennyboy
Thanx guys, for the response. Every time I notice some small errors that I've made and things that I need to do different. Your help is very appreciated. Anyone else??

btw. Made it with Reason 2.5
tranzMental
Not bad man! HAHAH! LoL at this being your first track though. You must have some prior producing experience. (Even if you didn't post a track) Cuz this didn't sound too bad. The 808 sounding kit was interesting. Overall the song is decent - missing many, many elements, but it wasn't bad. Keep it up! -Mental
Floorfiller
i'll listen to it later, but you know that if you put it online....you can't enter it in the contest...
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