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nick mahoney - tom's diner (progress mix)
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| nickmahoney |
Nick Mahoney - Tom's Diner (Progress Mix)
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Suzanne Vega - Tom's Diner (2003 Progressive Mix)
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Nick Mahoney feat Suzanne Vega - Tom's Diner (Progress Mix) ;)
Vocals by Suzanne Vega :)
criticism desired.
CLICK HERE TO DOWNLOAD in 192kbps
or use this link:
http://mail.med.upenn.edu/~nmahoney/nick_mahoney_-_toms_diner_(progress_mix).mp3 |
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| -blake- |
Downloading...
I'm interested to hear what you've done with this. I found the acapella on the net awhile and thought about using it for a track. The vocals are great.
I'll post up after I listen. |
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| -blake- |
Nice work with the vocals here! The effects you used sound great. Overall I like the feel of the song but there's a couple things I noticed:
The snare sounds a bit chinsy. Maybe use a clap or a snare with more reverb or something. The bass sounds good, but it's rather simple. This could go either way though, because the simplicity makes for a nice feel. However, maybe try making the bassline a bit more interesting. Also..the track doesn't really go anywhere. Besides the vocals there isn't much to grab you and pull you in.
At any rate, like I said I really like what you did with the vocals. Also, the strings are very nice and fit perfectly in there. This is a pretty chill song and the production is qutie good.
Keep up the good work! |
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| nickmahoney |
yeah, sorry for you dial-uppers, it may take a while cause its at 192kbps, but its pretty good (if i dont say so myself)..
nm
ps, thanks blake - i indeed worked with a couple different basslines and decided to make the track simple. there are actually three basslines playing, but the simplest one is the dominant. same thing with melodies, there is quite a bit written in there, but the vocals sound so nice uncluttered, i didnt want to overdo it. should i make the acoustic guitar louder (or the synths or the piano or the pad)? i want it to be chill but i dont want it to be boring. i know it doesnt really go anywhere, but its not exactly a trancer. if you think its too boring just playing through, let me know some ideas, maybe i'll just shorten it or something. thanks for the thought on the snare. it is a bit much, i guess i've just been listening to it for so long i didnt notice if it fit anymore. i'll look into changing that. thanks for the feedback! if you've anything you want feedback on, pm me. |
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| Boy trance |
| Ok, very well produced tune. I'm not sure I'm liking the way it starts off, something about the percussion...maybe a stronger kick? I really like the effects you've done on the vocals... very impressive. Otherwise it's a simple tune overal, not much to it. But I like :) |
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| Floorfiller |
| i agree...the percussion is a little weird. also to be honest i don't think the vocals really work here...they are a little too fast. everything sounds a little messy because i think its a little to fast...if you slow it down a bit it would probably sound better...l |
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| nickmahoney |
| thanks for all the feedback! |
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| bassaholix |
Nick Mahoney feat Suzanne Vega - Tom's Diner (Progress Mix)
sound betta?
Heheh.. nice production work you have on your hands... thanks for this nice tune, i pretty much agree on everyone elses input, but its very well done, i liked it n the vocals are madness :) |
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| nickmahoney |
| quote: | Originally posted by bassaholix
Nick Mahoney feat Suzanne Vega - Tom's Diner (Progress Mix)
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i like, makes me sound important :)
i was gonna go with:
Nick Mahoney - Nick's Diner (Nick's Progress Mix)*
*featuring Suzanne Vega and Nick Mahoney
but i think you're suggestion is just right.. |
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| sot |
| im diggin this tune very much. the effects on the vocals are real nice, the pad is real nice as well. I agree the percussion is a bit weird at times and it seems like the bass drums cancel out within eachother at times other than that, very well produced tune and keep up the good work :) |
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