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One Of My New Tracks...
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| DJTranceworld |
Hi There
I finished a load of new tracks and wondered if anyone wants to hear em. They are hard trance, most with huge basslines which i made. Anyway check them out & see what u think:
www.mp3.com/joe_truby |
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| hey cheggy |
The levels are off. The vocals are way to loud. I like your vocal gymnastics though. Very Derbish of you.
The beginning is too repetitive though. It took almost 4 minutes before any changes in the structure happened.
The build up needs some work. Its too empty. The lead you use works well, but the melody could be made heaps better with some more note changes. Its just too monotonous as it is. I notice that you have some note changes further on.
Good work man. Oh, by the way, I listened to what the hell is that |
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| alanzo |
| Nice bass and leads.. but very repetative and your precussion could use some life (it's to boring) But otherwise it sounds good. |
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| DJTranceworld |
Hi there
Cheers for the reponses, need some critism at last!! |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Good Lord, get rid of that background image.
Oh, and by the way -
I'd advise to considerably reduce the lyrics in What The Hell...(Is That Sh*t)... gets annoying reeeeeeally quickly. |
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