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| Somershine |
Hello!
I have created a sample for a new song I am working on. Could you please listen to it and give some comments and say what you think of it. I would really appreciate that!
download here
Bye,
Somershine |
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| AuralityKev |
Hi - I like the way that your sound is mixed, but I have to say that I can't get past the melody. It might be that the clip is so short I can't seem to get the bigger picture, but there's a note in there (it's in the strings, kinda sounds like an old video game engine revving) that just clashes really badly. I mean so much so that it's almost painful.
Maybe if you posted a larger clip we'd have a better idea for the overall sound you were going for?
-Kev |
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| alanzo |
| Your higher melody is pretty good.. but you need a better kick and I agree with the strings.. they sound out of tune. |
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| hey cheggy |
Seems like a nice melody, but its kinda hard to tell, the sample is only 13 seconds long. Maybe get a longer one up, and just make it 192kbps.
Sounds are distorted and muddy. They need to be cleared up and the kick is not prominant enough. Good idea, just needs a bit of work. |
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