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TA Haiku Thread (pg. 5)
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| Psy-T |
i want attention
i won't shut up till you give
me some attention. |
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| Mr. Pink |
| quote: | Originally posted by medinaM5
a morning dove feeds
in a marijuana bush
and sings a high coo |
This one is actually pretty clever. I liked it! :) |
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| StanVoid |
Hybrids are for people now, people now
Group of people driving people now
Get a hybrid, be good people now. |
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| RJT |
Bump.... Haiku is in' rad.
Edit: In the spirit of the thread....
Sometimes I read tales
Of broken dreams and lost chances
Tiesto breaks hearts |
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| Allied Nations |
crystals on the leaves
glistening in the dim light
waiting and waiting |
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| wizniz |
bumpin some sublime
forty ounces to freedom
tomorrow is school |
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| emc^2 |
baseball bat protruding
from blood-covered anus
_Ocean_Drive_ is dead!
_Ocean_Drive_ is dead
rotting lifeless vessel
maggots feast on flesh
someone must dispose of
_Ocean_Drive_'s dead carcas
it stinks worse than |
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| wizniz |
| quote: | Originally posted by emc^2
baseball bat protruding
from blood-covered anus
_Ocean_Drive_ is dead!
_Ocean_Drive_ is dead
rotting lifeless vessel
maggots feast on flesh
someone must dispose of
_Ocean_Drive_'s dead carcas
it stinks worse than |
middle one needs SEVEN syllabals. not six.
hey emc^2
leave the ing drama go
haiku pwns it all |
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| emc^2 |
| quote: | Originally posted by wizniz
middle one needs SEVEN syllabals. not six.
hey emc^2
leave the ing drama go
haiku pwns it all |
I am but a student
in the skills of haiku
master I am not.
Dramma is not needed
It is waste of time
On one limey c_nt |
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| RJT |
Some of you clearly
lack knowledge of haiku rules
your poems are |
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| Frenchie |
| quote: | Originally posted by RJT
Some of you clearly
lack knowledge of haiku rules
your poems are |
They all lack smartness
in the skills of these haikus
I say we throat punch |
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| wizniz |
| quote: | Originally posted by Frenchie
They all lack smartness
in the skills of these haikus
I say we throat punch |
off you daft bitch
throat punches are for teh 1337
hast thine the power? |
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