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EM - Himalaya
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| EternalMusic |
Hi guys,
this is something i made for my kusin's birthday party a month ago,i used her voice for some vocals in the tune. anyway, i would like to know what you guys think of it :) (good or bad) !
Hope you like it !
Cheers.
EM_-_Himalaya_(Original_Mix) |
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| State of Matter |
| Getting a 404 man. |
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| EternalMusic |
Oh right,
It works now :), thanks . |
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| hey cheggy |
Nice little intro. Sounds like a didge.
Intro Melody is quite good, but when the melody lead was running, I feal no bassline. I think it is there but it gets drowned out by the lead.
Cool breakdown. Choir samples??? I WANT I WANT I WANT. Cool vocals. Very impresive mate.
Melody is alright. I mean its good but its just a bit predictable if that makes sense. Synths work well with it and the overall sound seems quite clear and strong which is good.
Tell me where to get choir samples and I will write an even better review.
In all honesty, the song is good but it goes on a bit. The melody, while quite decent, didn't offer me enough to listen to it go for that long. And the bassline could have been a bit stronger as I mentioned earlier. |
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| EternalMusic |
Thanks heyCh, the choirs you'r talking about were written bymyself, but the synth was taken from NI-Pro53 i dont remmember which one, i'll check later.The melody isnt the BOMB i know, i had problems creating a creative one so i guess thats why it got very predictable. Bassline is something i need to work on really, should i use two or three basses, different ones i mean so it'll sound better or what?
Anyone else with some comments? :) |
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| hey cheggy |
| The bassline just seemed too high pitched. I felt it was lacking some of the lower frequencies. |
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| State of Matter |
It's a very nice song, nice melody (even if it is predictable), nice use of sounds. I always hear the same problem in your music and that's a lack of resonance on your synths. They always sound dull and flat as a result.
The song tends to drag on after the main melody comes in, needs a little more variation, maybe another breakdown or a little monotone intermission. |
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| EternalMusic |
| Thanks StateOM :), tell me something, whats that resonance thing you'ved mentioned, what do i have to do to improve it so the melody wont sound dull ? (I mean in FL4 ) |
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
Its all about layering your synths.
Use a couple of different sounds, add some background synths to the main one, that way your melody will have more depth, and it will sound deeper.
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