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Alphablue - Innerworks
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| rb2k1 |
Artist: Alphablue
Name: Innerworks
Style: 4 Strings | Above and Beyond | Rank 1
Info: My first "release" under alphablue that isnt a remix.
Note: Needs maybe a bit more mastering and i want to send it out as a demo.
Download: Save Target As
UPDATE:
Download updated with a leveled 96kbs version. (much better quality)
No Final Master yet tho!
Due to some insane comments about being a signable track i felt it necessary to put up a 96kb/s version while i master and send out the track! Wish Me LucK!
All Comments Appreciated! |
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| GrimReaper |
OMG! (i don't OMG alot but on this one i feel like doing it)
I'm speechless! I really like this, very much energy, driving bassline, good kick and those trancy breaks after 4 min mark really make a good effect. I could imagine this being played on ASOT and spinning this myself too. I just love all your sounds, smooth saw synths, beautiful atmosphere. Mmm soo beautiful!! The 2+ min breakdown & buildup is strong enough to compete with other trancers out on the trancefloors. I like it so much i could give it a 9.5/10, just some hi freqs here and there sound too overbearing and even a bit muffled (or whatyashouldcallit) when played out loud.. you should check the levels, they will kill ppl's ears (or speakers' trebles) in the club. Otherwise, IMO it's near perfection. |
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| EternalMusic |
Hi!
Its a decent track, great strings!Bass is wicked, the clap can be better, the melody around 5:00 is quite simple or dull hard to describe, anyways is it an Appregaitor ? If it is, maybe you should add another dinamic melody. Offcourse thats my opinion :), nice track overall. |
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| hadi burpee |
| hey bro, you already know what i think of this track, in amazing =). we can talk more later =) |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Pretty good stuff, I like the melody.
However, the pad seems to be too loud, it tends to hog the entire mix. There's also some slight distortion here and there. |
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| ABSYNTH |
Now this is big room trance at its best:D Wicked track.
There is a few minor points and others have pointed them out, the pads are too loud and do over power it in places with a slight distortion and the clap is too '909' if you know what i mean!:)
Other than that its on the money;) 9/10:D |
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| paranoik0 |
definitely check out the mastering, it's a little bit too loud (well, some say there isn't such thing as 'too loud', i disagree on there) and there are some clearly distorted areas. also, on the very start of the track i got a slight MIDI-ish/amatuer-ish feeling.. probably has to do with the bassline, but nevermind, maybe i'm exagerating a bit, it isn't a major deal.
apart from it, you got what it takes to be signed and played by the big djs! :D really good tune, the melodies are so simple yet so effective. keep up the good work |
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| rb2k1 |
I just want to thank everyone for checking this song out and being so positive about it and encouraging!
I am definetly going to take all the comments into my consideration while touching up this song!
Its really awesome to know such cool people and i am happy i am a part of the growing TrancEAddict Producers!
Thanks Again Everyone!!!! |
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| Mel David |
| Not bad. Melodies are aight but not quite memorable enough imo and not really a fan of the bass drum really. But that's just me. Other people here seem to dig the track. |
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| Floorfiller |
| quote: | Originally posted by GrimReaper
OMG! (i don't OMG alot but on this one i feel like doing it)
I'm speechless! I really like this, very much energy, driving bassline, good kick and those trancy breaks after 4 min mark really make a good effect. I could imagine this being played on ASOT and spinning this myself too. I just love all your sounds, smooth saw synths, beautiful atmosphere. Mmm soo beautiful!! The 2+ min breakdown & buildup is strong enough to compete with other trancers out on the trancefloors. I like it so much i could give it a 9.5/10, just some hi freqs here and there sound too overbearing and even a bit muffled (or whatyashouldcallit) when played out loud.. you should check the levels, they will kill ppl's ears (or speakers' trebles) in the club. Otherwise, IMO it's near perfection. |
after that review...i had to take a listen...:D
my thoughts:
its pretty good. i really liked that part around 2 minutes too...i think with a little refining it could be great. it does have a nice little quality to it... |
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| rb2k1 |
update: put up a higher quality 96kbs sample which i leveled properly. (link in 1st post) Its still not mastered completly but im pretty happy with the sound of it so far.
Thank You Everyone For Such Nice Comments!
I appreciate them greatly! |
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| Lightworks |
Sounds really nice Ross, great job on this one. Melodies are nice and have a nice flow to them. A bit of a break here and there would be nice to have though.
I'm not fond of the drums, they seem a bit 'out of the mix' - like they don't merge that well with the rest of the tune. Perhaps they are a little dry or too compressed?
I'd also add more wetness to the first synth that comes along, it also feels a bit strange like the drums, although has a nice and interesting sound to it.
I also hear some distortion, like Mr Mystery says, you'll have to get that out before sending it out ;)
Cheers,
Wim |
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