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Mark Johnson - Beyond Control (Feedback Please :))
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| Mark Johnson |
Just finished this tune. Im new on here too but hope you guys can take a listen to it and give me some feedback. Here's the link....
Beyond Control
It's an energy driven trancer. Produced using Reason 2.5 Arranged & Mixed using Cubase SX.
Hope you like it! :) |
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| a-L.MSI|BLiTz |
| nice build up, but overall its is only medicore to me, the melody has nothing special to it. but you sure do have some talent. :) |
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| Zombie14 |
Begining of track = :(
Bassline = :(
Buildup/Break = :)
After Break = :) |
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| Mark Johnson |
Think i will have a go at remixing this one now. Perhaps some more sounds and another synth with another melody at/after the break.
Thanks |
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| [nils] |
ok:
the bassline and "first" techy synth have to little power. more power, different sound would be great. and the synth that comes in 1:50 is.. to bouncy in notes. there's no "real" structure in it.
i like the 1/4 after the breakdown i finished. then, it just goes way "beyond control" :P i'd say, work more on that melody, change some sounds and add alot: fx, more pads (ambience pads), more perc and hats... :)
otherwise it's orignal, which is great! so do remix it, and post when finished :D |
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| Origin |
its nice ...
2 tell u the truth the tune is boring
the problem is u bilt up the whole track from one melody/syns
and the bass is 2 flat ...i think u need 2 make it more jumpy or somthing
:D |
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| dj-sean |
Pretty decent. I'm only giving it a quiet listen because I can't find my headphones and my roommates are sleeping, but I think the bassline sounds pretty decent (though it probably needs more sub-bass).
As others have said, this needs a lot more elements to it. Sub-melodies, effects, etc.
Has potential though, good job. |
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| Blincc |
| like it :) gimme the remix :D |
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