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Spacediver - Unspoken (Open-mind remix)
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| open-mind |
U must know the Svenson & Gielen remix.
Only the meldoy in the middle of the track is good, so i used it in all the stuff... =) |
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| Romain |
was a bit disappointed by the build up of the Svenson & Gielen remix.
But your remix is wonderful ! i like the intro, bassline. The break is amazing, main lead is nice too, very powerful (i was gonna say sthg a bit negative about that, but well just sounds perfect when you add that sound @ 7:20). Better than S&G's work IMO.
Great job, c'mon guys this deserves a listen. |
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| kewlness |
I really hate it when tracks don't get more than 1 or 2 reviews on these forums...
ok... overall impression, very well done track.. Percussion is well done, energy of it is excellent, good synth work, melody is decent
My favourite part about this track is the breakdown... When the strings come in it is just beautiful...
Main synth are pretty thick and heavy and I love it when it comes in
Another one of my favourite things about this track is the arrangement... It does have the typical build-up trance style of arrangement, but you did a wonderful job capturing what trance should sound like.
One thing however, I don't like is the kick though... It seems really weak and needs some heavy compression to get a good punch out of it... It could also help if you put a very soft click sound playing at exactly the same time of the kick
Another thing you need to watch out is clipping of sounds... I don't know if it's just me, but something sounds wrong at around 6:00... It sounds like you are trying to squeeze too much into that part... Mainly it's the main synth
However, I think there are a LOT more good things compared to the negatives in this track... Very well produced... |
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| Origin |
like the others sayed its a GOOD track ...
i realy liked the melody and the strings in the middle of the track
what i didnt like was the beginnig ...its sounds boring til 1:50 IMO
and u realy need 2 master it...
nice work m8 keep it up:D |
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| Luke Terry |
this is pretty cool, needs a good mixdown + master tho
the only problem with your production is that it is very fruity-esque, namely the trance lead 3xosc patch used and the simsynth effects ;)
it has a lot of potential, u also need a much better kick, you can improve greatly to be extremely good quick from this already. try not to be so preset happy aswell. it has kept me listening despite the faults tho, which is fair game :D |
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| open-mind |
| thanks for all this compliments. i will try to do much better! =) |
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| placebo |
| I dig it...nice track again... |
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