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Please listen to my new song!! Need reviews ASAP! Thanks!
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| nectario |
Hello everybody,
I just finished my new song. Let me know what you think! I'd a appreciate a review :-) (if it's good, if it sucks or whatever!) All notes and arrangement is done by me... Let me know what you like and don't like... :-)
You can download it from:
http://www.nektarios.com/three.mp3
Thanks!
-NK |
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| mentalbarter |
could it be any better?
perhaps give dj sammy a ring for some tips tho |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| Let me guess... fruityloops? |
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| attacc |
it's a good track, but there's some elements I don't like. The lead you have in the buildup and after I don't like, but the piano is very good I think. The synth that comes in at 2:20 is really sweet though :D Pads are nice too!
If you added a bassline with better drive and got rid of that lead I was talking about you'd have a very good track I think, so keep working on it :) |
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| kewlness |
i'm gonna say i don't like it...
just because you spammed the entire forums about your song |
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| Mike_B |
| found it cheesy, needs more depth to it or something, the first half before you introduce that piano sounds like it would fit well in an old atari video game. |
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| Mike_B |
| its needs layers, fast. |
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| nectario |
Negative comments are very welcome...
But hey, I only posted it in two forums (this and the music one)! Is this really spamming?
But in any case, I am sorry, and I won't do it again. Next time I will only post it in the Amateur Music producers forum... |
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| nectario |
Thanks.
Attac: Can you tell me which exactly lead you don't like? The one that dominates before and after the piano? |
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| Mike_B |
| that's the one that i find makes it cheesy if that helps |
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