|
my first trance track.. can i get some feedback?
|
View this Thread in Original format
| acell |
Hello all!! :D
Welp. Usualy i write hard trance but i was in a trancy mood so i remixed one of my hard trance/hard style trakcs into a sort'a prog sounding trance track..
This is the first time i've done this and i would love some feedback from you lovely people :)
it's called moment of clairty (sunday mix) and you can get it from http://www.djdeux.tk
thanks for your time guyz |
|
|
| hey cheggy |
Yeah man, this works. The beginning is a bit boring but gets better once your bassline comes in. The lead works really well with the melody too. The pad is a bit too overpowering though, it covers up the lead too much.
Good job though. I like this track. |
|
|
| acell |
| dam! thanks for your quick reply.. taken not of what you've said.. thanks for listerning |
|
|
| moth |
Thats pretty awesome for a first trance track.
Um, ditch those ugly double claps though. |
|
|
| acell |
| hehe.. i'll look into thoes claps.. anyone else have any feed back? :D |
|
|
| dj-sean |
Comments as I listen:
-Nice Pads.
-Kick could be way louder.
-Basslines doesn't stick out very much.
-Yeah, Pads are way louder than everything else.
-Bassline sounds out of key at one of its lower notes.
-Lead is the best part of the track, but it sounds like a really big mess after buildup. Entire track needs some seriously remastering.
Overall, this has potential but there are a lot of production details that need to be cleared up. |
|
|
| Lepric0rN |
sweet and steady start. for a first slowtrance song its amasing.. continue and im sure you get a great Dj future.. the song gets bether and bether after 5-6 min its marvellous
great work pal |
|
|
| acell |
thanks for your feedback dj-sean,
listerning over it again i agree with you.. does need mastering.. thanks for the feedback |
|
|
| dj-sean |
| Oh yeah, I forgot to mention that I really liked the arrangement of melodies, hence why I think the track has a lot of potential, hehe. Try to listen to it right after a pro tune and compare the way it all sounds. |
|
|
| acell |
Lepric0rN,
i'm glad you liked it man! Yeah.. it is my first slow trance track.. everything i've been working on has been hard trance so this is new ground for me.. i want to role the 2 sounds together and come up with something like flutlicht.. but a little harder but as melodic..
thanks for listerning man.. much apreciated :D |
|
|
|
|
