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| EternalMusic |
Hi guys!
Been a while since i've posted here a new track by myself.
Its abit different this time so i hope you like it!
Comments would be more than appreciated!
Thank you.
EM-Crystalic glance
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| State of Matter |
| Everyone owes it to themselves to take a listen to this, very nice work. You're definitely one of the TA rising stars, solid production from beginning to end. |
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
You already know my thoughts of this tune my friend :)
Well done!
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| [nils] |
i liked it! very nice work with all the different sounds, they match perfectly. enjoyed the "ehhh - oohhh" bell:ish sound.. (if it says anything to you). nice bassline and perc. pads are good as well
though, the main lead melody could use some more eq work. i think that less low freq. and more high would do the trick
good producing!
thanks :D |
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| EternalMusic |
Thanks everyone! :) means the world to me!
nils: I'll try to eq it abit more, and play with it, hopefuly it'll sound better :). |
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| dj-sean |
Comments as I listen:
Nice loud kick.
Bassline is good, but with the kick and bassline going at the same time it sounds a little unclean sounding.
I like the percs.
I don't really like that sorta vocal stab but that's a matter of personal taste.
Good hook.
The vocal type thing is a lot better around the 1:45 mark.
Sounds really good and full at 2:12.
Nice breakdown, good pads.
The breakbeat is lame IMO, that kick really doesn't work for it.
Dope melodies.
That clickclack sample at 3:30 bothers me a little, would like it more if it was congas or something.
Powerful buildup that doesn't let you down afterwards. Good lead melody, though I think the lead could use a little more high end.
Is it not in full four four time frame on purpose? I find it a little distracting. It's cool to be different and non-formulaic, but I find it a little distracting.
Overall great track. By cleaning up the production a little (see points I mentioned) I think this could be an amazing tune.
Great work. |
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| EternalMusic |
Thanks sean, im gona work on what you've said! :)
btw, should i use a harder kick in the breakdown ?
EM. |
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| Massive84 |
this track is pretty orignal mate!
though i found a bit not my style, but thats a taste thing..
i actually liked the breakbeat alot, why was it so bad? |
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| dj-sean |
| The breakbeat wasn't "bad", in fact I think it's a great addition, it's just that the kick was way too weak for my liking and I think it could be improved quite a bit by having a more solid one in there. |
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| JohnOC |
excellent track! 192 please!! :)
fantastic, great percussion and nice bass flow
although the kick patterns sometime go a bit wierd?
nice intro leads, perhaps too many reverse cymbals
also of the leads reso is too high
id add more snare builds, climax it
rimshots are too loud,need some deep bass booms in the break
also the attack and release settings of the pads are a bit wrong?
apart from that brilliant and i want a full mp3 PM me!!!! |
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| Lightworks |
| Just had a brief listen to it and I can only agree to what John has said. Very nice tun mate! PM me that full mp3 when done pls ;) |
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