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well here's sample to my work :)
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| shahar_own |
Its a good sample 192kbs
i made it with Fruity Loops
The track ian't finished Bcoz my PC crushed with all my tunes :(
The tune name is: Cyxes - Pure Rotter
http://www.hamula.co.il/Files/7390/...2B1BA8EAC1}.mp3
P.s. sorry about the bad eglish :p
what do you think about it? :rolleyes: |
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| EternalMusic |
Hi !
The melody is nice, even though i would change a few notes in some parts of the melody. The main idea is ok, however i can barely hear the bass, the kick is also very weak... Well you are a new producer, keep playing with the frutiy and you'll see some better results in the future! Use VST's & some external samples for the kick and synths, the builtin synths+kicks which the Fruity has to offer realy suck :(. Anyway, this sample of you'rs has a potential ;).
Cheers. |
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| shahar_own |
| quote: | Originally posted by EternalMusic
Hi !
The melody is nice, even though i would change a few notes in some parts of the melody. The main idea is ok, however i can barely hear the bass, the kick is also very weak... Well you are a new producer, keep playing with the frutiy and you'll see some better results in the future! Use VST's & some external samples for the kick and synths, the builtin synths+kicks which the Fruity has to offer realy suck :(. Anyway, this sample of you'rs has a potential ;).
Cheers. |
thank you m8 :)
wich VSTI software you recomend?
Absynth? |
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| MK-S |
Hey..
First off, the lead is too loud. Drowns out the rest of the mix.
The percs from what I can hear, sound pretty cool.
Bassline.. well is there one? :p
The lead sound itself I think could work. The melody... well, I like the first few bars, but I don't like the way it progresses. Work on it a bit more ;)
Also, things are somewhat repitive, try and introduce some more variation. |
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| shahar_own |
| quote: | Originally posted by MK-S
Hey..
First off, the lead is too loud. Drowns out the rest of the mix.
The percs from what I can hear, sound pretty cool.
Bassline.. well is there one? :p
The lead sound itself I think could work. The melody... well, I like the first few bars, but I don't like the way it progresses. Work on it a bit more ;)
Also, things are somewhat repitive, try and introduce some more variation. |
heyaaa who's here :eyes:
first of all this TUNE:
Haak - Frenzy(MK-S remix) :eyespop: love it man! GJ here
now.. like i sad my PC crushed so its not the final version of my track :\
its the first thing i did..
then iv'e made some fixse's (like bass)
also, i have made some changes in my melody
but all gone now :(
thank you for your reply man :D
but i cant work on this any more :\
i dont have the samples of this tune . . .
and my PC is very week
p3 600 mhz..
my sound card is Creative 128 Vibra (20$) :stongue:
so. . . thats y i dont have good quality in my works:=\
P.s.
if you want you can do remix for that :) |
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| shahar_own |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ ZERO
not a bad melody u got there, thought the mastering is quite off.
u can bareley hear the bass and the kick is pretty weak.
i would recomend the Superwave P8 VST (its free - search for it in google)
and the novation v-station, i dont know where u can find that - just look around somewhere.
man, would i be able to remix this track? |
i will try your VSTI's thank you..
and sure you can do remix :]
the name of this tune is
Cyxes - Pure rotter |
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
If thats your first work then i must say it isnt that bad...
When i started producing, the stuff i made sounded alot worse than your work.
Melody is pretty cool :)
Alittle hebrew here:
אחי, אני מכיר אנשים עם מחשב דומה לשלך שהוציאו איתו קטעים שאתה לא תאמין, אבל חוץ מזה תעזוב את הקטע הזה, תתחיל לעבוד על דברים חדשים, כל קטע שלך שתסיים אתה תראה שיפור מהקודם.
בקשר לפלאגאינים אז אני ממליץ לך בחום על
FM7
:wtf:
Good luck with your future productions! :thepirate |
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| shahar_own |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ ZERO
hey, would u be able to email the midi of the tune (emails in my sig), pm me if u dont know how to make midis in flp. |
like i sad m8 i dont have nothing left of this :(
my hard drive deleted all my works |
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| shahar_own |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ-Kreing^^
If thats your first work then i must say it isnt that bad...
When i started producing, the stuff i made sounded alot worse than your work.
Melody is pretty cool :)
Alittle hebrew here:
אחי, אני מכיר אנשים עם מחשב דומה לשלך שהוציאו איתו קטעים שאתה לא תאמין, אבל חוץ מזה תעזוב את הקטע הזה, תתחיל לעבוד על דברים חדשים, כל קטע שלך שתסיים אתה תראה שיפור מהקודם.
בקשר לפלאגאינים אז אני ממליץ לך בחום על
FM7
:wtf:
Good luck with your future productions! :thepirate |
thank you i will try to get your VSTI allso :} |
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