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My first melody - please comment! (645 kb)
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| Domz |
I havn't been doing this stuff for a long time, so i need feedback.
Download: Untitled Melody |
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| KilldaDJ |
| oh gawd...it has begun... |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| Well the idea is good but some of the notes are just plain wrong... it sounds horribly out of key. |
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| Domz |
| yeh, it's still in progress, could you give specific note's? or is it all just e? hehe |
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| Massive84 |
| hmm it doesn't really flow.. |
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| DJ Sanctuary |
| Yeah - sounds nice and trancey. I especially like the crash cymbal effect halfway through! I wanna hear more than 40 seconds! |
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| Domz |
| nah i cringe at it now :mad: |
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| Digital Aura |
Dude..you have mad producing skillz !
But yeah, the melody (or lack thereof) is off.
Was that your hook? Just need a nice melodic hook...cuz everything else was fine! In other words ... your song was cool, but the music sucked! |
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| ASOT100 |
| synths sound good but the composition of notes is pretty off |
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| Tranc3 |
| Ok you need to look up some info on music theory, specifically in terms of consonance and dissonance. |
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