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My 1st releasable track!!! Fyrious - Caramella.. [DD]
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| SgtFoo |
aaawww!! common plz!!? so many views, but no listenner reviews?
*bump, bump bump* |
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| hey cheggy |
It helps if you provide a link to download.
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It's past 2 minutes now and I'm yet to hear a bassline. The synths you use are nice although percussion could be better. The melody is fairly nice but again more presence of the bassline could add definition to the song. |
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| Massive84 |
as i listen
kick is to low, lacks power.
clap is ugly, imo, lacks reverb, and don't like the loop.
as cheggy said this lacks base, and useually base is what gives a track a dancing drive i think.
intro is a bit long and boring same synth over and over and takes to long i say.
the break: the synth(detuned one think it is or unsion) don't like the way the volume is automated.
i like the way you bring up the main synth, is very sudden and i like that.
the melody is not bad. not so keen about the crash, don't like the sample. not sharp enough.
add a base is very important in a trance track i think. make the intro a bit intresting and some percussion change should do it. |
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| Syeker |
Hearing it now. I'm gonna have to go with Massive84 the kick is kind of low and the clap could use some reverb but i like the melody is damn beautiful:p. I like the way you enter the lead in the 2:00 mark but add some delay to it. In the 6:08 mark sounds to sudden the way you stop pretty much everything (you could use filter here).
Keep up working you'll get were you're going:D |
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| marco.V |
the melody is pretty interesting as the synth works in general but yea the percussions (especially the clap) & the bassline are very basic here.
well it needs improvement imo but it also has potential |
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