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First production - Domz LW - Unborn
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| Domz |
ok let's see you guy's flame this one too death, rofl (flaming is what i need to improve it, so yeh!)
my first production, some of you might have listened to the melody of it which i posted at an earlier date, here is the first attempt at a mix of it. regards and thank's for listening (comment's welcome)
Download: Domz LW - Unborn |
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| icewind |
Not a bad little track there. I especially enjoyed the drop and synth/pad you got there at 1:20. Thought I got lost in scarface for a sec. I liked it. The melody after feels right. I think there are just some notes missing. Too many single notes, needs some more note progression if you get me? Aside from the lead being beefed up. I liked it. It gave me a good feeling. Heh. Still love that pad. How you make it?
Icewind - Fire Burns (Original Mix) |
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| Domz |
Thank's for the reply. i really appreciate the feedback. As for the pad/strings, that's what my remix was based upon. I made a few string melodies, this was the best, then i started building lead's and bassline's and percussion etc.
I'm gonna take you're feedback and apply it, also i think the percussion could do with some more variation. Cheers. |
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| KilldaDJ |
its ing . go kill urself.
haha, mild humour from me there...
downloading, getright being queer, will comment once fin. |
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| Domz |
| nice to see you are still abusing me! just because you got you're new pc don't go thinking you're all hard! :D |
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| KilldaDJ |
im harder than j00 bitch! :D
yeah downloaded, its not bad, ive heard worse from u
the melody is original, the synths used r too basic and dont go into depth
as for variation in the percussion...well there isnt much
u stole some of my drumset u bitch :p
bassline is a bit basic, u need to thicken that up and work on EQing/compressing
expect a remix from me next week.
overall, its not bad. |
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