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Convex - Dark Loops (McGhee Dub Mix) (pg. 2)
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| MK-S |
| quote: | Originally posted by paranoik0
nice, percs sound very clear, but as everyone said a little bit of a melodic element (or a dull synth) could improve it. or if you want to keep it as an exclusively percussive track, try a bit more variation, or even some wild filtering to make it stand out |
That pretty much sums it up :) Good job. |
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| Martin McG |
cheers for the comments people :D much appreciated
im currently in the process of updating the song at the moment
added another synthy picotto esque sub bass to give it more BOOM :p
working on a sub melody to counter the sub bass
and thinking about adding a little vocal snippet if i can find the right one lol
and as for the filtering im getting some tips on that as we speak
cheers lads!
any more? |
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| arctic |
I keep getting a bloody 'too many users connected' message whenever I try to download it.
Ah well, i'll keep trying. :p |
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| Martin McG |
| quote: | Originally posted by arctic
I keep getting a bloody 'too many users connected' message whenever I try to download it.
Ah well, i'll keep trying. :p |
lol ill hit you on msn if you prefer :) |
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| dj-sean |
| Unable to download it; will review when I'm able. |
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| Martin McG |
ok havinf some trouble ATM with the hosting
too many connections or something :S
just a quick update, song is almost finished added a rhythm synth to give it more groove so ive just to master that now
and still considering the little vocal snippets but havent got any i like ATM so i may just stick with no vocals
ill post up the new version for some reviews when the host has cooled down a bit lol
martin |
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| Fundamental |
Ah, sounds better Martin! Lovin the melody you have there now - suits the style of the track perfectly, and it seems to keep the track flowing more.
Er... Good improvement! :D |
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| Nemesis44 |
Like the thought of anything dark and bangin' wasn't able to hear it though... will try again later. :)
Cheers
Nem |
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| ABSYNTH |
First off, thanks for the help mate, you 2 Luke;)
The track is sounding well, the new riff is holding its own but i think like and some have pointed out that it needs some kind of melody to finish it off! Mastering is really clean, sweet sound.
Keep workin on that hook and you could have a top track here and if i was you i would be sending it 2 ID+T:D
Good job mate!
Duncan |
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| Martin McG |
cheers for the review dunc
ok people now just getting the hosting fixed so i can upload the updated version and get som more feedback :)
upload very soon |
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| Bryan Kearney |
Excellent track really like this.
Fair play |
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| Martin McG |
cheers bryan
like i say the update will be up ASAP so hopefully itll add something more to the track :) |
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