| Nemesis44 |
Writing as I hear it. :)
Nice production quality which makes it sound very professional.
Not perhaps convinced about the chord change around 1:19 but that is probably my own personal prefference.
Nice pads comming in too.
You have some well needed chord changes around the 4:00 mark that are needed earlier I think.
Overall you have a very nice sound there but I think that it needs more in terms of melody as there isn't enough going on in my opinion.
Besides I'm still learning myself so you can take my comments for what they are worth. :)
Nice work though so keep it comming.
Cheers
Nem |
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