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A couple of my tracks from last year
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| FuzzyGreen |
These are some of my older tracks that went out to the labels and didn't get a response, feel free to give comments/suggestions/reviews:
Osteen - Blue
A progressive track. I feel that there are a couple of things that need to be fixed but I got tired of working on it.
Osteen - Everything will be ok
A melodic track from late 02, I'm very happy with this track, unfortunately the labels weren't.
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| mikefasssy |
Everything will be ok:
3:00 - some of the bassline seem...off. the melody is very relaxing, and the synth and percs so far have been very nice. Ibiza'ish cd feel
Breakdown is different, still very relaxing, but I prefer the intro/outro pads that you use, they are very cool.
final note: the bassline seems a bit out of place.
Blue:
likin the stabby bassline a lot, although when it goes into hyper active mode at around2:40 that is kind of weird.
although in the breakdown it doesn't sound as awkward.
Overall, the tracks are very minimal, relaxing. not sure if this is whatyour going for, but it worked if it was.
Keep it up.
Caleb |
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| FuzzyGreen |
| Thanks for the reviews Caleb. My latest track should be done in a couple of weeks, hopefully it will pick up where these tracks drop off. I better have improved somewhat over the last four years. |
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| FuzzyGreen |
| Bump, I would appreciate more feedback!!!! |
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