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Tolkame - Your Shining
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hi,
this is my first attempt a progressive type trance song...
what do you think of it so far?
this is the main melody...i tried to make a melody which would fit a persons moment in the spotlight...the songs called "your shining" and im using the vocals from the famous happy hard song (breeze n styles).
so what do you think?
http://www.geocities.com/jamxdeleon...yourshining.mp3
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-Add more melody. This is way too simple. Try to add more low-notes between those you have now.
-The kickdrum is to weak. Too "packed in" if u know what I mean..?
-And that fx sounding like...ehh... something scrappy or whatever. It HAS to be removed 'cause it's not pithed with the song or anything.
-More bass has to added. and also after the bass comes in, count to nine as the kickdrum kicks, and listen to the bass in that "section" I don't think it is in harmony with the rest of the music. Argh
-Lots of thing to do here man!!! |
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