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Planisphere - Teardrop (Mike Upton Remix) (pg. 2)
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| DRM |
Thanx for the comments guys. Seems i need to work harder on my bass, tho i guess i knew that after luke telling me every 5 mins :p
sorry u didnt enjoy it Al Cordero, but u cant win em all heh :D |
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| DjCommisad |
sounded great =)
no real complaints. one point the kick almost seemed like it was galloping, but it lasted so short and didnt bother me much anyways, overall, great =) |
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| Mick |
| v.nice mike, really enjoyed it. i agree with the bass needing to sound more fuller, but i ing luv the breakdown, think i mite play this nxt tues ;) |
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| raditz |
| nice melody, I also believe it has still a poor sound on the bass. Any chance of having the midi for a remix? :D |
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| djdavid |
| :eek: this sounds far from good!!! |
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| Ian^ |
| quote: | Originally posted by djdavid
:eek: this sounds far from good!!! |
that's pretty much a response though. Tell the guy why, which bits you like or don't like, it's much better to be constructive than a gimp ;) |
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| Bren-F |
A decent track.
there are a couple of issues relatung to mastering & sample selection that some people have mentioned, but what glares out at me in this track is the bassdrum & bass. When creating a track of this type the bass should sit tight with the bass drum to keep the energy flowing, however in this track the bass seems to float above the bass losing rythm & energy. Try some different compression/eq levels on the bass to make it sit more with the bassdrum.
+ points:
grat breakdown, strings sound awsome as does the melody. With some work this could sound great :) |
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| djdavid |
| quote: | Originally posted by Ian^
that's pretty much a response though. Tell the guy why, which bits you like or don't like, it's much better to be constructive than a gimp ;) |
guess i typed this in a bad mood yesterday... wasn't meant to be like this, sorry:confused: i'll be more constructive next time :toocool: |
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| Ian^ |
| quote: | Originally posted by djdavid
guess i typed this in a bad mood yesterday... wasn't meant to be like this, sorry:confused: i'll be more constructive next time :toocool: |
thanks, guys like mike (drm) realise that they're not the best, but still put similar effort in, constructive criticism in such cases is always best as it lets them know where they can improve & makes the forum on a whole much useful |
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| DRM |
| thanks for the feedback guys. I need some1 to show how to make decent basslines cuz i have no clue lol. i'll badger luke next time im round at the ugly baffoon's house :D |
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| Luke Terry |
| quote: | Originally posted by DRM
thanks for the feedback guys. I need some1 to show how to make decent basslines cuz i have no clue lol. i'll badger luke next time im round at the ugly baffoon's house :D |
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| DRM |
| quote: | Originally posted by Luke Terry
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LMAO :stongue:
i'm gonna get u terry *shakes an angry fist* |
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