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| djfurbydavos |
as replied on my other topic, here again in this forum:
I uploaded a song of mine, and i need some critics so i can improve it! So PLZ post whatever u want..
CLICK HERE
Greetz,
Furby
and i used Reason |
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| hey cheggy |
Pretty cool beginning, very atmospheric sounding. Part of the intro melody seemed a little bit out of tune with itself, not sure if this is cos I've been drinking or if it really is out of tune.
Piano in breakdown is cool, infact, the breakdown in general is pretty cool, very peaceful. I would try bringing in that main lead a little softer though, if that makes sense, like rather than having it start full on, bring it up to max with the filters so that it doesn't all of a sudden just jump into the mix.
As for the main section of the song, I don't know, it just doesn't grab me, not sure why though, sorry. i think maybe because I had already heard that lead for quite a while in the breakdownso that when the kick came in, it didn't really offer anything extra. Try making the track build a little more, that might provide some more motion to the track. Also, if you have a little snare build in the body of the track, make the build turn into something, like adding a bit of percussion after the track so that the build in energy eventuates into something. |
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| djfurbydavos |
| any other opinions?:haha: |
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| StealthAssassin |
| Refer back to cheggy's statements cause I feel pretty much the same way. The breakdown is killer the piano makes it. I also have to agree with the main lead starting to loud, fade it in or use some sort of filter when you introduce it, it's starting too strongly. I think the melody is in tune, so it must have been the drinking cheggy.:haha: |
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| The Designer |
| The break is really good. Nice piano ;) |
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