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Shield_&_Armor_-_Time_Again_(OriginalMix)_Main_Tune_Cut
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Dj-Portal
Hi guys download my new melody and tell me what you think
:)
http://members.lycos.co.uk/inclubwe...in_Tune_Cut.mp3

RIGHT click SAVE TARGET AS
10x !
EternalMusic
Hi fella ;) welcome to the boards.
About the melody - its pretty good as i told you on ICQ, the only thing that boders me is the emptyness. Add some more elemtents, pads etc.
Cheers :D
Dj-Portal
Well i'll try... anyways you'll be at my house tommorow helping me improve it
;)
Fractal
Can't download this:confused:
Dj-Portal
Why ? the link is fine..
just RIGHT click SAVE TARGET AS
:/
Dj-Portal
Dont enter the link !
right click on it and then click
"SAVE TARGET AS"
and download it
Fractal
It's ok now... it was a problem with my Opera browser.

About your track:
I really liked the idea ! The melody is very nice.But the instruments are a bit simple. Try to make some FAT sounds. I think your track needs more bass and maybe another reverb effect.
Cheerz,
Max
Dj-Portal
Thnaks ! I'll do my best improving it and i'll keep posting new
samples from this track
DJ-Kreing^^
The melody is pretty good i guess nothing to emotional thought...
I didn't like those sudden kicks you got going there, pads sounds very simple and flat, not enough power in them.
Fractal already mentioned the lack of bass in the build... other than that it's pretty nice, main synth sound cool.
Just work on making your mix more complex and full, its sounds abit empty and standard as it is now.
Dj-Portal
10x For the feedback i'll try improve the track by them :D

ManTrance
I really like some of the ideas in here, especially the pads and lead.

I would love to play about with the midi if possible.

I'll PM ya.
NoisyNeil
Nice warm and happy sound to it :) I really like that, but as others also said already, ... add some more elements to it to create a real climax.
Keep up the good work!
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