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My First Trance Single! (updated!)
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| aliendj |
Well previously I posted a demo of it, but it was not mastered the track yet.
Now, Allmost complete. but its 64 Kb/sec , I will upload the good quality after reading your comments, to fix if there is any error on it.
This is my first trance single, my first composition. hope u like it.
http://www.bejdarfel.org/Alien-DJ_Alienation.mp3
btw I was thinking about ALIENATION for the title, but then something else came on my mind, which is Aliens In Euphoria. cz the melody sounds like "Happiness" .
so what do you think?
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| jimmy makkas |
Very good for a first track, nice melody, needs more production - it sounds a bit hollow (could be the mp3 quality tho?)
What did you make the track in? At about 2:30 theres a cool whoosh fx thing, how'd you do that? |
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| aliendj |
thanks :)
I guess u mean that sound which is like space-shuttle lunch? then it is a sample, from a CD. |
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| pho mo |
Excellent first track!
I think the arrangement is particularly good, I like the way the different lines play against each other.
From about 4:00 is especially lush, I really like the feel of it.
It will be good to hear a higher quality mp3 when you finish the song. |
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| Bren-F |
Nice melody
good structure
sound levels are pretty decent aswell.
I would fix the following:
try to add some more reverb/delay to some of your synths - they sound a little plastic like.
Percussion needs fixing - bassdrum is a bit weak (I can sort you out with a good one for this track)
and the high end percussion eg claps & hats is almost unhearable - try to thicken the high ed percussion a bit & add more layers.
Other then that its sounding good mate :) |
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| aliendj |
thanks for ur reply :)
I maked the clap, hi-hats higher, & more treble.
also some gain to the low-bass
but which synths to add reverb?
try to add some more reverb/delay to some of your synths - they sound a little plastic like.
Percussion needs fixing - bassdrum is a bit weak (I can sort you out with a good one for this track)
and the high end percussion eg claps & hats is almost unhearable - try to thicken the high ed percussion a bit & add more layers. |
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| hadi burpee |
| thats pretty good for your first track. good knowing that you have the basic idea down. like the other people said, try to add more reverb to the percussion. nice melodies, good work, have you been practicing long or is that the first try. also what did you use, have fun producing, its fun |
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| aliendj |
| quote: | Originally posted by hadi ******
thats pretty good for your first track. good knowing that you have the basic idea down. like the other people said, try to add more reverb to the percussion. nice melodies, good work, have you been practicing long or is that the first try. also what did you use, have fun producing, its fun |
Thanks :)
I have remixed around 6 songs, & mixed 10 songs on EJAY. which are much easier than this one. (so this is first track on Reason, using keyboard & not samples-loops...)
its been 2 weeks im on it, daily changing stuff, make it better n better. also im hearin the comments & try to fix them for sure!
-the first synth., whic is really plastic like, I changed it. now its more nice sounds like humming aliens under the sea :D
-gain on bass
-gain on beats & specially kick, hi-hats, clap...
-more treble
-more reverbs !
I used Reason 2.5 + Battery for beats, & T-Tracks for mastering (10x Bren-F)
now uploading final version :D, i'll post it soon! |
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