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Finally my finished progressive tune
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| Trazedict |
At least my closest guess would be progressive lol. Workin at this for a while. I love it personally. Please tell me what needs work. The transitions still need a little work I think. I'm tryin to get really good at this and only can with your help. :D still not sure what to call it. any ideas?
David Franz - Untitled
Time: 9:36 Size: About 8.5 MB
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edit: oh and it isn't "mastered" yet. im not sure how to even do that. |
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| PerfectCircle |
Heres my newbie report:
Nice eery start.
I like it when the bass comes in and the extra drums a little later, quite a nice hard sound.
I like the melody that comes in at around 1:40 and the drums a bit later, very nice sound with the added layers.
3:00 god, nice layering, definately not a thin sound.
That effect that continues when the breakdown starts, I'm not sure how to describe it (cosmic with the volume increasing?) its quite loud (unless thats the intention).
Whoah! I like it when the bass comes in at 5:40, I'd dance to that!
Overall I like it even though I don't listen to progessive much! A good blend of gentle relaxing melody with some driving bass and drums at time. Nice! :) |
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| Trazedict |
| hey man thanks for the comment :D dont get too many of them lol |
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| Ub3rTrancer |
Yeah ill do a newbie review too... y not
Downloading it rigth now...
intro is ns, i like the beat, i think it drags a lil too long
i like the beats that comes in at ~1:35, but again, i think u dragging the same beat way too long.
Bass at ~4:45 needs to be louder.
6:42 i like the addition of that beat.
Good work, but its missing some elements, it needs to be harder, its too chilled out to be a prog tune. But good work! Keep it up!
Again... this is very nublet! Just a few thoughts on the track! Later! |
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