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[Classic Uplifting] - Alpha Concept - Alpha Concept
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| Sunquest |
it's really nice, i like the synth coming in at 3:50, kkind of like the trancemaster 25 to 29 ;)
just a few suggestions, i think it needs a little more treble, and maybe raise the volume on the piano just a touch
the mastering is excellent on the kick, beats, bass, and the whole thing, just the treble really
nice work, keep up the good work :D |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Okay... humm...
Do you have reverb on the bass drum? It sounds really weird and makes the bassline sound very weak.
On a whole I'd say this track has the same problem as many other lately (dunno if it's a new trend or what) - it has way too much reverb on everything and the result is like it was played in a large empty hall. The highs are muddy and unclear.
The percs are too simple and pushed to the background by the pads. They also sound like a loop - too monotonous with no variation at all.
The melody is nice but too ordinary for my tastes. It doesn't really stand out in any way.
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When the lead kicks in properly it drowns out everything - I can only hear the lead and the beat. |
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| ManTrance |
Fair enuf. Thought this was quite good myself. I like the reverb effect. Gives it a spacey feeling instead of in ur face, like all trance these days.
Agree on the percs being un-repetitive. I cant be faffed to go variating my percs until Ive got some decent feedback on the melody/track, to assess if its worth finishing.
Not sure on how to get me highs a bit less muddy tho. Any help??? |
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| Sunquest |
now that i listen to it again :) , u could lower the reverb on the clap, and most of the synths, just make it all a little less reverby like mr.mystery said
and to get the treble higher u can use a program called T-racks, its an equalizer program very easy to use and very good imo
i hope i helped |
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| Lightworks |
This sounds nice to me, good focus on the melody. Seems to be forgotten sometimes nowadays...
I did feel the bass was quite unpowerful, maybe because it's quite low? Percs could use some punch as well I think.
Keep it up!
Wim |
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| ManTrance |
I've completely reworked this. Changed the bass,percs,reverb, adding some counter melodies,a new staccato lead.
Havent completely finished it yet tho, got to add a 2nd hook and an outro, then do some work on the mastering. Getting some Clips in there. Hopefully, this'll b finished by Sunday night. I'll post it as a new track, under my new alias 'Lunar'.
Any1 else fancy havin a listen, add some more comments.
Remix package should be available by Sunday nite too, so if you think you got some ideas for this, then just PM me.
Cheers. |
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