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Oded Drori - Exit Wound
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| oDrori |
Thought I'd through this one a chance on the web...
Another track, this time both synthwork and the melody are quite simple but (hopefully) effective. Overally quite a flowing track, but quite dependant on your taste as I discovered. Nuff blabbering.
I am a link
Choon is 9:12 long, 192 kbps so file is quite large, hopefully won't be a problem.
Waiting anxiously ;)
Oded |
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| Sunquest |
ur link is wrong
it leads to another post somewwhere on TA :D
http://oded_drori.artists.mpfspromo...xit%20Wound.mp3
thats the correct link ^
anyways about the track:
im having thoughts on these kicks of urs :(
not the best kick really...
i think u could use more percs, its kinda of empty in most places
the melody is nice, but the synths are kind of 1980 hehe
the bass is excellent, if u had a better kick it would sound even better.
overall good stuff, keep it up |
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| smrq |
I agree with that guy ^^^ for the most part... I like the synth though :) Also, it frequently sounds really grainy- is that intentional? I don't particularly like it...
Overall though, nice track. Love the bassline! |
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| oDrori |
| quote: | Originally posted by Sunquest
ur link is wrong
it leads to another post somewwhere on TA :D
http://oded_drori.artists.mpfspromo...xit%20Wound.mp3
thats the correct link ^
anyways about the track:
im having thoughts on these kicks of urs :(
not the best kick really...
i think u could use more percs, its kinda of empty in most places
the melody is nice, but the synths are kind of 1980 hehe
the bass is excellent, if u had a better kick it would sound even better.
overall good stuff, keep it up |
Is the kick THAT aweful? what do you think it misses?
And about the "emptyness", does it feel empty even when the track is "Full On" or only in other parts?
| quote: | Originally posted by smrq
I agree with that guy ^^^ for the most part... I like the synth though :) Also, it frequently sounds really grainy- is that intentional? I don't particularly like it...
Overall though, nice track. Love the bassline! |
Whatcha mean by "Grainy"? :p
Thanks for the commentz guyz |
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| Sunquest |
the kick is just missing a strong kick, i dunno how to explain hehe
and as for the emptyness its empty when its NOT full on, its empty in other parts ;)
good question |
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| djHollen |
Hi oDrori,
Im sorry but I have to agree with the statements about about the kick. Thats all Ill say about that though.
This is a very interesting track. You got some cool FX. I like the percussion. The melody is all right. Not the greatest, in my opinion, but certainly not bad by any means.
I dont like the snare roll, if thats what that sound effect is supposed to be.
I think youre really creative. I like originality and this song is over-flowing with it. Its just not me though. Im not saying its sucks or even that its bad; just not me.
I think that Ararat is your stronger song.
Good luck in the future.
Hollen |
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| oDrori |
| quote: | Originally posted by djHollen
Hi oDrori,
Im sorry but I have to agree with the statements about about the kick. Thats all Ill say about that though.
This is a very interesting track. You got some cool FX. I like the percussion. The melody is all right. Not the greatest, in my opinion, but certainly not bad by any means.
I dont like the snare roll, if thats what that sound effect is supposed to be.
I think youre really creative. I like originality and this song is over-flowing with it. Its just not me though. Im not saying its sucks or even that its bad; just not me.
I think that Ararat is your stronger song.
Good luck in the future.
Hollen |
Thanks mate :) :D :) As always appreciated and taken in :) |
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