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New Club Trance - Feedback Please!
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| djnelsy |
Heyy all!
I've recently completed two new trance tracks and was after as much feedback as possible.
Neptune - Mental State [Original Mix]
This is one of my harder tracks. Trance heading towards hard-style with a touch of Psy.
Neptune - Conscious Unleash [Promo UK Mix]
This one is definately dancefloor material. This originally was a remix of a UK pop group's track, soon to be released in Europe, though without their vocals the music is entirely my own.
Thundering bassline combined with roaring melodies and dreamy breaks.
Please check these tracks out and let me know what you think, where I may need improving? Which is better? etc.
Any feedback is good feedback! :)
Many Regards,
n e p t u n e |
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| djnelsy |
come on guyz! im dying to know what people think of these tracks!
Please hit me!! |
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| Jay M |
Hey, you artist name differs 1 letter from mine (Neotune), I once thought of changing the 'o' into a 'p', but I won't. :D
Mental state is not my style. U used some cool fx but it all seems overcompressed or so. It screams and clips. Quality could be better, can hear that. Some nice ideas though.
Same for Conscious Unleash. I think you should give it another kick.
Lead is not my taste. Breaks are cool tho. Buildup is decent too.
Cheers
-Jay |
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| djnelsy |
Hey thanx Neotune!
So close hey (Neptune)
Anyway, did you just stream the trax off the net?
If so the quality is reduced to very poor.
If you want to get the better quality, download them, even though theyre only @ 128kbs it's better than streaming.
There is no clipping. Believe me, I wouldnt be able to live with myself if there was.
Thanks again for your comments. :happy2: |
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| Jay M |
| I dl-d them. Ok not clipping, just sort of screaming I guess.. dunno how to say :D |
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