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Sunquest - Hearts In Motion
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| Sunquest |
this is a laid back track from me, i hope u like it, added a guitar part near the end and ya, pretty ambient...
Track Info:
Length: 3:18
Quality: 160 kbps
Genre: Chillout Trance
Download Link:
http://dj-gingi.artists.mpfspromoti...on_(Sample).mp3
(right click save target as)
*note*-this is a clip from the middle, doesnt start out like this...
feedback appreciated :) , o and Disco Stu, this is for youuuuu :whip: :whip: :whip: (just had to say that) |
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| Polak |
Very good tune, I like it. I think you are on a pro level now. This tune is better than many others that are released.
But I think at 14 second the intro/reverb/bass (I dont know how to call it) comes out too aggressively, maybe you should put this "intro/reverb/bass" gradually so it fits the whole tune.
And I think the tambourine is a little bit too loud, but just a little.
BTW. THe tracks that you have in your signature are awsome:eyespop: |
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| Dj Caine |
| Hey, indeed nice chill track. Could hear longer version. |
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| Sunquest |
cheers guys for replies :D
ill post a longer sample when i get more done, i didnt finish yet :rolleyes:
ill work on that agressive thing ur talking about, u mean the bass is coming too loud and early maybe, ill fix it up ;)
any more comments? good or bad... |
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| EternalMusic |
I like you'r style :). This aint bad, very chilly and mellow. WOW love the guitars, what VST did you use for this one??? share with me :D,
anyway quality.
EM// |
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| Polak |
| quote: | Originally posted by Sunquest
ill work on that agressive thing ur talking about, u mean the bass is coming too loud and early maybe, ill fix it up ;)
any more comments? good or bad... |
In my opinion bass is comming too lound, Try to lower the bass for like half of the second or something like that , and gradually (during that half of the second) go to the normal volume. If it doesnt work like that then "move" the bass line to the "left" by half of the second (or different number)
I dont think it comes too early, the setup up is good.
But from the other side if you do it You can kill building energy of the track, so I dont know
BTW. Im not a producer so maybe im wrong. Im expressing my opinion. |
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| MarkzMan_X |
Hey Sunquest! You are producing like a madman. Great!
My comment about this track:
This is the first time that i didn't have to equilize (bass/mid/high) on my mixer in order to make the song sound properly. So that's a good point. First time (no wait, second) that i like the bass. And even the high sounds too sound fine to me and didn't gave me any headache. Reason is just a pain in the ass if it comes to hi-freq sounds, but it's nice to hear that you "passed that by" in a way.
However, besides the fact that everything sounds o-kay, i'm not really pleased with the melody. Don't get me wrong, the melody is nice but it's not *catchy*. I've listened to your song 3 times now, but i can't recall the melody other that it's a guitar sound (nice sound by the way). Maybe this could be solved if that guitar-melody isn't the main-melody but the "upcoming melody", like a prologue to the main melody (which has to be created). That main-melody should connect with the guitar-melody and the track would be booming and, also important, recognizable for the crowd.
Tell me what you think about that plan.
Oh by the way, your tracks sound better and better... i think it's a matter of time that one of your songs get "vinylzed". Only thing we need is an epic melody! (just like in your George Hales remix) |
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| Sunquest |
thanx for replies guys :D
| quote: | Originally posted by MarkzMan_X
Hey Sunquest! You are producing like a madman. Great!
My comment about this track:
This is the first time that i didn't have to equilize (bass/mid/high) on my mixer in order to make the song sound properly. So that's a good point. First time (no wait, second) that i like the bass. And even the high sounds too sound fine to me and didn't gave me any headache. Reason is just a pain in the ass if it comes to hi-freq sounds, but it's nice to hear that you "passed that by" in a way.
However, besides the fact that everything sounds o-kay, i'm not really pleased with the melody. Don't get me wrong, the melody is nice but it's not *catchy*. I've listened to your song 3 times now, but i can't recall the melody other that it's a guitar sound (nice sound by the way). Maybe this could be solved if that guitar-melody isn't the main-melody but the "upcoming melody", like a prologue to the main melody (which has to be created). That main-melody should connect with the guitar-melody and the track would be booming and, also important, recognizable for the crowd.
Tell me what you think about that plan.
Oh by the way, your tracks sound better and better... i think it's a matter of time that one of your songs get "vinylzed". Only thing we need is an epic melody! (just like in your George Hales remix) |
w0w :D first BIG review of one my tracks hehe
thanx :D
as for the catchy melody i know what u mean, i get that a in a lot of my tracks :(
i geuss its my style hehe
but i updated this one, take a listen again, maybe its better now? because guitar starts off in the beginning too, i hope its better... im mostly random all over my tracks if uve noticed, im all over the place...
anyways let me know if this is better, i just changed the first bit... |
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| DJ Terraplex |
this is mint
Dont know what else to say
this has real potential though
the guitar is top stuff! |
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| MarkzMan_X |
My comment about the updated version:
Starts off great. Nice FX sounds. Like the "tube" kinda sound starting at 00:20. A bit soft "kick" at 00:30. Sound too Reason-like if you ask me. Good professional sounding clap. I like all those "high" sounds. Nice chords, a bit soft though and you could make them more energetic. The choir is doing their job. Nice. Still, the chords need a bit more volume. I'm not a real fan of the melody, because the first few notes are too random if you ask me. They don't have a real melody structure. The first few notes start too late, because the last few notes are asking for more melody, but that melody comes later than the average listener (.e.g me ;-)) has in mind.
Great song overall. 7.5/10. And please... finish it! :) |
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| Sunquest |
to MarkzMan_X , lol, well then, i dunno what to say :conf:
IMO its more a chilling track then a clubber... its kind of like "who cares about memorizing the melody" and just listen to it whenever, its kind of like leama and moor , their songs are all over the place
(by the way, the song doesnt start out like this) but anyways ill work on it some more, thanx for feedback :D |
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| jcosgrove |
| i like this tracka hell of a lot, you really need to get it finished...the only thing i didnt like was the little piano melody...like i explained to ya :D |
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