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Mane - Magical Universe
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| Mane |
Hello
Ive done my new track, all feedbacks are really welcome :)
Mane - Magical Universe
(right click and save target as...then unrar,thx)
btw. ive got speed @ 30kb so I think its not so bad
greetings
Lukas |
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| EternalMusic |
Hi there,
I thinks there some nice ideas, cool synths etc, and it has a nice vibe, feeling. But you'r main problem (which i've noticed from you'r previous productions) are the melodys, they are too simple and abit dry i guess. Work on the musical side, and you'll blow us away for sure ;).
EM// |
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| Mane |
| wow , nice to read feedback like that ;), i will try work more then :) |
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| TJM |
I've listened to this through 3/4 times and I think its great, the main melody is simple but it still works really well and the second melody as it builds keeps things interesting.
B-line and synths are all good and pro sounding, all the elements fit well. Love the breakdown where it builds and reaches a crescendo but comes back down before kicking, bit like urban train. I think a snare for when it does come back in would bring it out a bit more though. Also maybe make the breakbeat in the breakdown a bit longer, although I did think the breakdown went on for a bit too long.
Congrats, great tune :D |
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