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Michael Trenfield - Space And Time
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| BassAngel |
Wow, very nice from the start. This beat kicks!!
Proper beauty flow you got going here mate, production is spot on.
Open hi hat is very washy, covers a bit too much space methinks.
Would really love to hear more percussion building this up as it goes. Y'know what I mean, cos it's really driving, you just want rolling hats to be added in to really give it that driving feel.
Feel it needs something extra when it kicks off to separate it from what came before. Hang on though, we're at the second breakdown so I'm gonna hold off on that. Maybe this will give it....
Waiting for something mint now....
It's good what you bring in but there is so much more potential in this it's untrue. That's a positive, you've got a winner. I love the pattern the main lead uses, really drags over and gives that bit more groove. Keep wanting to hear a sine wave in there somewhere, to act as a counter to this. Think that's what it's missing a smart hook/counter melody to bring it out.
This is great stuff man, really good. Feel that lead now though is getting a bit much for me. Needs to maybe be brought out and in again.
So, love the production, love the ideas, love the tune, just feel there's more in this thing waiting to be coaxed out.....
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| oDrori |
Nice, bouncy bass... some delay would enhance it nicely methinks.
Sharp beats overall, could use more layering.
The chordy synth is nice but there should be moer stuff going on in the background, 4 mins. are a long time so layering must be used...
From here on it's pretty good, melody is too repetitive for my taste |
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| Tren |
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| Sunquest |
listening...
(why does it say e-damn mix?)
anyways, nice bass to start off with :)
kick coming in with percs, excellent kick
percs are beauty
ah here is the bad part :( the synth u got that starts at 2:10 or somthing, its too weak, need to make it louder and more "fuller"
u can add a second layer (meaning make a second and/or tthird synth with that same melody but a touch of different sound, itll be much more powerful.)
at first i thought it was dj quicksilver song :D sounds like him a lot
so anyways, try that out ^ and keep us updated :D
loving the kick, percs and bass though
keep it up
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| M1cro5lave |
This is an amazing tune Michael! I loved your other works like Ghost and I must say that you are one of my fav. on tranceaddict :D
The melody is very simple, but this one has the right touch which makes it a great melody. The kicks are alright, hats sounds nice with the rest of the track.
I would still consider adding some more sounds to the intro so that it doesn't sound so one-way througn the beginning.
I think this is a great track! Love it all the way. :D
And as I said: you are on of my fav producers around here.... great job Tren! |
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| Jay M |
Hey there Tren,
Kick and bass are quite cool. The build up is simple but still good. Only point is it stays very static, could use some more variation. Could be solved a bit with more layers.
Production quality is good. I don't mind the hihats. I think you ment to keep it simple. This sounds a bit 90s from 5:23. It drags a bit. But still, good stuff. |
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| b|p|3m |
Your productions are nice. Footprints, Ghost and this are amazing especially in the melodies. Great work!
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| broken silence |
Hey,
Sounds nice so far, maybe a bit more on the mids would be nice.
It's very clean though, sounds are well represented. Kick could be slightly louder :P
What it really needs though are some more interesting fills..and things that could catch you a bit off guard. It's very straight forard, arrangement is shot on, but just a bit bland in arrangement and the "whooosh" sparkle department..if you get what i'm trying to say.
Melody sounds nice, strings were great. Really nice material in here. Just a few arrangement tweaks and maybe some more FX and fills and you'll have a quite nice banger mate :P
Even so, I enjoyed the hell out of listening :) |
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