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MNIT - Intelligence (chilling with guitar, strings and stuff:-))
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| mynameistrance |
Intelligence
it's (again) a chilling song, starting off with some reverby strings - building up to a simple (yet effective:)) guitarriff.
i'm not really a man of many words, just check out the song:p
and please gimme some comments
this is already the 2nd version, first version is here:
www.byterage.u-n-f.com/Intelligence.mp3
this one had a piano instead of the guitar, less percussion and the melody @ 3min21 weren't there yet. I changed the piano coz it was a bit too high and didn't go to well with the strings, guitar is just a little bit lower in tone.
Greetz
Maarten |
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| Sunquest |
not bad :D
the melody is ok, my fav part is the beats, i love those kind of chillout beats, i dont know what to suggest to u hehe, ah here... the snare that starts off on its own @ 4:01 or something, thats no good alone :(, it sounds too empty, either remove that or add something else perhaps
well besides that its already well done enough :D
it kind of reminds me of blank and jones - watching the waves :D good stuff
keep it up :D
peace |
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| mynameistrance |
thanx for the feedback:)
i'll see what i can do bout those snares;) |
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