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Vylix presents Airflow - Eternal
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| teknasia |
Hi all!
It's been a year since i finished a track.. a few days ago I started with a track and here ya go! I finally finished one after all :)
http://users.pandora.be/dj_vylix/Homemade
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Vylix presents Airflow - Eternal
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Created with Reason 2.5
Mastered with Soundforge 6
styl: melodic, energetic trance
leave some (constructive) comments plz! :)
thx all |
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| EternalMusic |
Hi there,
Nice bassline, it could be abit deeper though. Didnt like that insect FX, sounds kinda wierd :conf:. Nice synths you got there, but some are too high and they cause clipping. Nice lead, remminds me of some old trance tunes. Melody is avg. The kick needs to be punchier.
This aint a bad work :), keep working on it.
Cheers,
EM. |
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| teknasia |
thx for the comments mate!
I uploaded a reworked version! :)
Made the bass deeper, the kick punchier, masterd the synth & changed some effects :)
greetz |
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| DeZmA |
My little review
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Liked the intro
Some nice efx & synths
Buildup is good, I'd cut some bars between the moment where the beat stops and the melody starts tho
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Clap too loud & basic
Melody is rather basic
Needs some mixing too, too much mids, not enough hi's (very noticable around 5') |
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| BassAngel |
Hmmm, listening now.....
There's some potential in this tune. I really think a lot of the bit at the end about 5:50 ish where you have the main synth riff in the background and the string.
Shame there's not more LFO type variation on the string or something, just so it doesn't sound so samey when the next note comes back.
I don't like the bassdrum in relation to the clap, EQ the clap through the synth a bit and lower it's volume. Either that or boost your bassdrum. More percussion wouldn't hurt either.
It's pretty good, just needs something to make it "special" y'know?
Keep it going though man, hopefully this will be first of many after your hiatus.
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