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Three Of My Tracks..."Frozen"..."Dark Storm"..."Snake Eyes"...
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| Al_Vito |
i have uploaded 3 of my tracks...i want to know what you think...
the first one is melodic & has nice strings & is sort of trancey...
Salvinooo - Frozen...
the second one is deep & dark...its still trancey though & its got a sound like the green martian...idustry to it...
Salvinooo - Dark Storm...
the third one is loads ov things...drum & bass...techy...noise...
Salvinooo - Snake Eyes |
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| Al_Vito |
i like constructive critisism if you have any...
i`m new on TA so i`d like too know your thoughts...
thank you...
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| BassAngel |
Frozen - firstly, the strings sound straight from a cheap keyboard. I recommend getting some FX on them. Then the riff comes in. The riff itself is fine, just has too much on it EQ wise, low shelf it I suggest that would give you more room on the bassdrum cos at the moment the lead is too dominant, but not in a good way. It would also give you room to put a proper bassline in. I could see this working so much more, cos I like the notes you are using for the chords, almost like a scene in a film or something.
Dark Storm - Sounds better but again, EQ the low shelf on stuff, it'll give you more room in your mix. That closed hihat sounds a bit like it needs it. GM sounds on some of your stuff and again you'd benefit from a bassline.
Snake Eyes - These are premade loops eh? Hard to criticize on them cos they are already done. Think it could benefit from some better patches too.
Overall you just need to work on basslines for your tunes and check the EQ make sure everything has it's own space in the mix. Also, put some FX on stuff or just use better patches.
Keep it going mate!
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| EternalMusic |
I have to agree with BassAngel,
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| Al_Vito |
thank you for your comments bassangel...
so its my eq's i need too work on really...
frozen is about 1 year old now & i dont have the file for it from when i made it & dark storm is old & i dont have the file for that either...so they will probably stay how they are...
thank you for your comments though...ill keep them in mind for my tracks from now on...
& thank you for taking the time out too listen too them...
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| BassAngel |
You are more than welcome my friend!
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